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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!
schedule
February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
harsh man. poor naruto was really in love. sucks... the situation not the story.
Should you do a multi chapter on this?? aahhh i would say yes because i like how u write and if they are to be reincarnated they wdnt be vampires (bored of vamp stories now) HOWEVER this is just screaming angst! like mega depressing, crush me under its oppressive weight kinda angst :S do i really want to put myself through that?? i'll let others decide. if u write it i'll read tho and see how it goes :)
Should you do a multi chapter on this?? aahhh i would say yes because i like how u write and if they are to be reincarnated they wdnt be vampires (bored of vamp stories now) HOWEVER this is just screaming angst! like mega depressing, crush me under its oppressive weight kinda angst :S do i really want to put myself through that?? i'll let others decide. if u write it i'll read tho and see how it goes :)
schedule
February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, please update soon!!
schedule
February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, I love it!! Especially at the end with Naruto dying and how you discribed it, simply delicious ;D
I can see how this would be a oneshot cause I personally love open ended things like this but it would be pretty sweet if you did continue!
Great job ^_^
I can see how this would be a oneshot cause I personally love open ended things like this but it would be pretty sweet if you did continue!
Great job ^_^
schedule
February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you stop it there o.o
-cries-
It was sooo good too!!!
-cries-
It was sooo good too!!!
schedule
February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, definitely one for a multi-chapter story!