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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm impressed. This was extremely well-written. You're rather good at writing smut without too many cliches or too much purple prose. My favorite phrase was "leaned with graceful negligence." I don't know why, but this gave me a really clear image and seemed to fit Sasuke well. Great job!
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome and I wish you would made a sequel, I'm curious to how the course of things would go.. Your an awsome writer! :)
-Xhexx
-Xhexx
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July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh please, it needs a continuation!
pleeeeease chapter 2 NOW!
hahahaah it was, just, UOOOOU. i can't breath or thing at this moment, neeeed moreee!
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pleeeeease chapter 2 NOW!
hahahaah it was, just, UOOOOU. i can't breath or thing at this moment, neeeed moreee!
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please write one i would love a new chapter to this tale as its very hot and i ahve read just about eveyr thing else you have out
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg yoo HAVE to sequel this!!!!!!!!!
if yoo dont then i will die, just die!!!!
love,love,love,love,LOVE IT! :D
if yoo dont then i will die, just die!!!!
love,love,love,love,LOVE IT! :D
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHA!!!! I would adore a sequel...hopefully one with a bewildered, flabbergasted Sasuke. :D :D :D Heeheehee.
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha omg that was great! Yes, Sasuke wouldn't know what hit him when Naruto shows up to college. hehe, Are you planning to write a sequel? It'd be cool just to know how you write Sasuke's reaction. aha.
yep, definitely a great read! Thanks for sharing!!
yep, definitely a great read! Thanks for sharing!!
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another example of amazing work. I love all your stories. Your characterization is well-written. I hope you write the sequel. Until next time, take care and god bless.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Write a sequel!! Please?
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahahaha.
fwarr nose bleed.
thats the best one shot au smut fic that i can currently think of. (and i have read ALOT!)
i love it and the ending was killer. i shall return to your main page in the hopes of seeing the sequel, however if its not there i will perhaps cry but then proceed to read your other works.
LOVED IT thanks sooo much, this is like ahhh!
(nose still bleeding)
fwarr nose bleed.
thats the best one shot au smut fic that i can currently think of. (and i have read ALOT!)
i love it and the ending was killer. i shall return to your main page in the hopes of seeing the sequel, however if its not there i will perhaps cry but then proceed to read your other works.
LOVED IT thanks sooo much, this is like ahhh!
(nose still bleeding)