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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if adi doesn't make you, then i sure as hell will!!! god, i loved that! and as hot as it was, this was my favorite line.
Sasuke brought a hand up to caress the strange scars on Naruto’s cheek, curious to see what they felt like when Sasuke wasn’t slamming his fist into them.
what can i say? i'm a sucker for humor.
i liked it. <3
Sasuke brought a hand up to caress the strange scars on Naruto’s cheek, curious to see what they felt like when Sasuke wasn’t slamming his fist into them.
what can i say? i'm a sucker for humor.
i liked it. <3
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK,...YOu just GOTTA write a sequel to this...I really loved reading this....
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaaa!!! The ending was so cool!!! I WUV it!! Update please, let this not be the end, there's so much UST in the air!!
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since you ended the story in the manner you did, it's kinda obvious that a sequel will be demanded. I get the feeling that a lot of people are going to demand one from you. I think you should write one, either way. Great story by the way. It was quite amusing.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please, please, please, write a sequel. This was one of the best stories I have ever read. I am begging you, write a sequel pleas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*pupy dog eyes* dose it "have" to be Adi to ask for the sequel, can I ask (begg) for it...? *sloutch* Hey, can blam a girl for trying. ^___^; If you haven't knowtess, I love this one-shot! It was GREAT! I sure hope Adi asked for the sequel, cause I sure the hell want it. Please?
~To Adi (if you see this reivew)~
*On hands and knees begging* Please, please, PLEASE, try and get Zrina to write the sequel...*hopeing, pleading* I will give you lots, and lots of cookes!? XD
~To Adi (if you see this reivew)~
*On hands and knees begging* Please, please, PLEASE, try and get Zrina to write the sequel...*hopeing, pleading* I will give you lots, and lots of cookes!? XD
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo, I loved this. You are an excellent author please keep up the good work and I am definately up for a sequal to this...speaking of which is there still gonna b a sequal to "The Sound of Dreams?" just curious. Ok keep up the good work.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Wasn't so sure about the title but a friend recommended this and I'm so glad I read it. You MUST write the sequel :-) I can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction when he sees Naruto enrolled at University XD ~ Belle
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::Squeeeeeeeeeal!!!!:: hahaaha i totally almost missed this one because i saw the title and was like, eww!! some 14 girls have no couth! LOL them went i was stalking checking your profile to see if Blackmail and Betrayal had been updated, i saw YOU wrote this, which of course meant i had to read it! i love it! the tension was so small-farm what-the-hell-do-i-do-with-my-life intense and realistic, well, as realistic as sexy ass buys rolling around f***ing on the floor of a Qwiky Lube gets. XDDDD it was making me so sad, though, to think Naruto and Sasuke would somehow drift apart and lose the thread of destiny threatening to entwine them! so the ending was perfect!!!! of course, you knoooow, it doesn't really read so much like an ending as a Chapter 1. ::waggles eyebrow:: i encourage you in all your endeavors!! ::waves flag::
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ps, are you really planning on making a full length epic sequel to The Sound of Dreams? haha you're prolly like ARGH, don't nag me about that!!1 so im sorry!!! just hopeful that you will. ::xoxo::
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ps, are you really planning on making a full length epic sequel to The Sound of Dreams? haha you're prolly like ARGH, don't nag me about that!!1 so im sorry!!! just hopeful that you will. ::xoxo::
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
REALLY nice one....you absolutely have to write a sequel =)