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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was WOW!!! I really loved it.
Please write a sequel.
Please write a sequel.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
My new favourite fic! You managed to squish so much into here Z baby without making it too complicated and oh god its so god damned perfect. I love this to so many pieces. Never have I reread a fic three times one after the other.
Naruto buried his face against Sasuke’s neck, trying to soak up as much of the boy as he could before they were yanked apart by some bystander Oh wow, only the hugging at the end tops this line!
And they kissed! Ack! You have no idea how much I jumped up and down when I was reading this fic (and no not like that!) It's so fantastic. I can't heap enough praise on this.
And the bracket touches just made me grin! THIS HAD EVERYTHING IN IT AND YOU MANAGED TO PULL THIS OFF PERFECTLY. PERFECT PERFECT PERFECTTTTTTTTT.
They're just so damn cute and amazingly hot together in this, its hard to get them to both at the same time, but Z went where no fanfic author has gone! INTO PERFECT FIC LAND!
Everytime I go back to quote more stuff I just end up rereading. I LOVE THIS. WILL MARRY YOU.
omg! I'm gonna come back tomorrow and review again (when I've managed to memorise the entire fic) I LOVE THIS.
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.
Cannot stress enough the perfect and utter loveness of this fic. OWN MY SOUL NOW WOMAN.
My new favourite fic! You managed to squish so much into here Z baby without making it too complicated and oh god its so god damned perfect. I love this to so many pieces. Never have I reread a fic three times one after the other.
Naruto buried his face against Sasuke’s neck, trying to soak up as much of the boy as he could before they were yanked apart by some bystander Oh wow, only the hugging at the end tops this line!
And they kissed! Ack! You have no idea how much I jumped up and down when I was reading this fic (and no not like that!) It's so fantastic. I can't heap enough praise on this.
And the bracket touches just made me grin! THIS HAD EVERYTHING IN IT AND YOU MANAGED TO PULL THIS OFF PERFECTLY. PERFECT PERFECT PERFECTTTTTTTTT.
They're just so damn cute and amazingly hot together in this, its hard to get them to both at the same time, but Z went where no fanfic author has gone! INTO PERFECT FIC LAND!
Everytime I go back to quote more stuff I just end up rereading. I LOVE THIS. WILL MARRY YOU.
omg! I'm gonna come back tomorrow and review again (when I've managed to memorise the entire fic) I LOVE THIS.
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.
Cannot stress enough the perfect and utter loveness of this fic. OWN MY SOUL NOW WOMAN.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adie makes you write a sequal... what about the rest of us screaming fans who'll stalk your every move. I REALLLLY want to see Sasuke's expression when he sees naruto. Are they going to be roommates????
Slave
oh, and while you're busy filling our request for more of this one, make certain you get the others done as well.
seriosly, I love all your stories and always look forward to updates.
Slave
oh, and while you're busy filling our request for more of this one, make certain you get the others done as well.
seriosly, I love all your stories and always look forward to updates.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noo! I DEMAND a sequel! C'mon you were just setting us all up for it.
Even so, this was once again and amazing piece of work, as all your stories are. It was hot, dirty and with sincere emotions too. It was just perfect. I loved the fight that you put Naruto and Sasuke up for, it seemed all the more realistic. Loved the ending.
Please, please make a sequel! It would be a sin not to! Nice Job :)
Even so, this was once again and amazing piece of work, as all your stories are. It was hot, dirty and with sincere emotions too. It was just perfect. I loved the fight that you put Naruto and Sasuke up for, it seemed all the more realistic. Loved the ending.
Please, please make a sequel! It would be a sin not to! Nice Job :)
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haw haw XD, Sasuke is always underestimating Naruto. Boy needs a good smack most of the time. Yeah, that was hot. :Thumbs Up!:
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!...
pretty please
pretty please
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Write a sequel or I will send my army of bean sprouts after you. Thats right, they're green and beany. Beware.
Very well done, btw. This story reminded me of the perverted birthday cards I've gotten from a friend with a thing for mechanics missing shirts. This story just begs artwork.
Very well done, btw. This story reminded me of the perverted birthday cards I've gotten from a friend with a thing for mechanics missing shirts. This story just begs artwork.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was great!!.. I hope Adi makes you write the sequal soon, cause Sasuke's face at seeing Naruto at State would be great!!.. not to mention Naruto better off than he while there.. XD..
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If Adi does'nt make u write a sequel I sure will. This was so awesome! I loved the ending!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME ENDING RIGHT THERE. *happy*
SEQUEL, YESPLEASEKAYTHANKS. *g*
SEQUEL, YESPLEASEKAYTHANKS. *g*