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O Benevolent, talented, unrivaled, (probably really too busy for your own good), lovely Zrina! I beseech thee to make this fine oneshot into another masterpiece by thine talented and creative mind! Please appease the hungry beasts (better known as your readers and reviewers) by extending your eloquent touch to enhance this fic by explaining the full story!

Please?

Pretty please? ~ Jelp

(Oh, and if you didn't catch it among the silly jargon - I really, really loved this fic!)

Adi should make you write a sequal.

Nicely written, good fun to read. :D

Z! I'm sooo happy to see one of your stories:) It's the bees knees! ^_^

Adi,I demand you command her to get busy on that sequel.

...Awesome by the way, and I'm not just saying that because there was some extremely-hot-eroticly-kinky-sexy autoshop SEX (o_0)...
...but that did have a big roll...
I love your writing style and I'm glad you decided to give it a happy ending with the added bonus of Naruto being a college boy (college boy Naruto is extremely hot:p).
Hope to see more fics from you in the near future (hint hint)
Seriously though breaks over, get on that sequel- chop!chop!

a sequel would be welcome:)

(I review as I read, and this one looks like it’s gonna be looooong.)
What’s a wife-beater in this context? ô_o . . . . Love the paragraph about his father. . . . So, was Itachi killed as well?
Love the description of their relationship and interaction with each other. . . . I’d love to see a picture of Naruto working on the car like this. . . . Boy, Sasuke sure is a jerk in this! . . . Love the paragraph on Sasuke and want. . . . Heh, Sasuke works in a jewelry store, but is a rough guy at heart. ^_^ . . . . Love how Naruto just turned the mood once he realized there was nobody else there. . . . This twisted relationship is so cool! They’re fighting like hell, and then all of a sudden, it’s smoochie time! =) . . . . Oooooooh, ouch, Sasuke, that was mean. >.< . . . Love the bit with the parenthesis. . . . This is dizzying. . . . Love the paragraph starting with, “Deciding that he had been compliant [. . .]” . . . . (*snicker*) “The yammering libido.” So true. ^^ . . . . “The erotic pose,” I WANNA SEE!! *_* . . . . Heheh *clang* XD . . . . Interesting: in one fic, he sews pretty nicely, and in the other, he can’t sew for shit. ^^ . . . . AHAHAHA!! “What’s that doing here?” *disturbed frown* “Don’t ask. You really don’t wanna know.” YES I DO!! XDDD -- Okay, no I don’t. . . . The funny thing is the pretty music of the soundtrack I’m listening to just came on while I’m reading this. ô_ô . . . . Heh. They’re both embarrassed. . . . (*giggle*) The picture/camera dialogue. ^^ . . . . AHAHAHA!! “Let’s switch places and I’ll tell you that.” XDDD That line’s hilarious!! XDD . . . (*BLUSH*) *_* . . . . Awww, sweet. . . . Love the conflicting emotions. . . . Huh? What, is he going to drive home shirt’n’shoeless? . . . I like the dialogue, but it seems sad. . . . YAAAAAY!! He’s going to State, too! ^_^

Very cool! =)

This is going to be fun...

“Fuck,”...“We’re getting there.” Great lines, funny.


"Fine! You want (to be) fucked so bad, I'll give it to you!" HELLZ YEAH, BITCH! Give it to him good!

*splashes face with cold water* Whew. That was seriously one of the hottest one-shots(*cough*) I have read in awhile. I don't know, maybe it was the all beat-each-other-up-greased-ness. *claps*

PS:
I may like this so much I might draw the "erotic pose" Sasuke. Just as a present :)