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Yes! Sequel please! XD This story is so much fun, and ItachiXShikamaru is so hawt! Thank you so much for sharing this. Seriously. You're da bomb!

that has got to be one of the hottest naruto pairings i've ever seen^^

Man, I loved this chapter. I can't say why, but I think it has something to do with seeing Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. xD Omigosh, it has been--what?--three years since I've actually read any word of Inuyasha and stuff. I feel so old. Hahaha.

Anyway, I'm glad you decided to go for the shorter route, because man, it'd be a shame if you had to take months to get the characters out. I wasn't at all sure about what the fudge Pein or the Akatsuki was doing in this story, but then, with your brilliance, I got to understand it. xD I mean, wowww. That's just. Wow.

Nah. Shikamaru isn't OOC anymore. He's just doggy-style now. So, sorta freaky but still coo. That, and oh! You know Sesshy and Inunu? Well, they're IC so it makes sense. They're the only ones of their clan left. xD Haha. That's priceless and good. What about procreating? lol. Just joking.

Yeah, so. Hm. You know about the whole "use Shikamaru" thing? I don't get it. Does that mean that they don't have use for the Jinchuuriki or...Shikamaru is better than Naruto, now that he's a doggy-demon thingy? Hm. WHAT A MYSTERY!

-Hails your genius-

I must say... that was a very weird an unexpected twist. And yet somehow I was still expecting it... As soon as the description of Sesshomaru started I couldn't help but start laughing. Ah what fun.
I look forward to the next update.

Hmm, I like it a lot. I was curious as to who the master was and when you said that you added two crossovers that got my attention even more. And low and behold! It was none other then my favorite Lord, Sesshoumaru. I am very greatful you picked someone like him and Inuyasha. I can't wait to see what else happens to poor Shikamaru.

PossessedMuse *_*

Aw, geez! Where have I been? Four chapters already, and I just found this XD. Anyway, this is really cool. I read chapters 1-3 wondering who this "master" was going to be, and when he arrived and you described him (with the kimono and white hair and stuff) I was like, "Mwaahahaha! Sesshoumaru!!!" And when he gave Shikamaru over to Pein, I was like, "Whoa, didn't see that one coming." The story is progressing very nicely. Now I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

All I can say is wow. This story is unlike any I have read so far. I love it, and you make me want to read more.

OMG this story is awesome! I wanna know who attacked Shika, I wanna know why the voice in his head told him to do that, I wanna read the next chapter! lol

Okay, okay--back up a bit.

WTF?!

I can't believe that Shikamaru would get mindcontrolled so easily. I mean, yeah, sure, he's in a doggy form but...err, wtf? This is Shikamaru for crying out loud...But, I'm sure you had a good reason for this, because, well, yeah. It made the story flow more. Just think about it if Shika had actually struggled with the voice in his mind! O-O The possibilities...

Anyway, wow. Just wow. Shino is Naruto's boyfriend? Oo, now THAT is a very cute and unique pairing. XD I like it. Cheers to your genius!

And, and. I'm wondering, you know. Who the voice is, yeah. Can I guess that it's--errr. Hm. It COULD be some Naruto villain or (dun dun dun) one of the Rookie Nine! Le gasp! Shuffle back and facefault--yeah! It could be! I mean, just wow. It'd be so twisted if it were Chouji or Neji or...or (LE GASP) KAKASHI!

Okay, okay, back it up there. I was only thinking of the possibilities, so you don't have to laugh at my lame attempts to assuage my curiosity. :3 But so far so good, you've got me hooked. xD

First chapter coud have a been a little scarier, but it's still good.
The whole Shika turning into a dog is highly amusing to, despite the whole first chapter and the plot of the story. Ah well.
This is good. Can't wait for more.