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ooOOOOOooo. V interesting. Can't wait for the next installment!

W-woah! That is some pret-ty scary crap. You had me almost screaming in my seat! xD I was like, "Oh nooo, oh shiiittt" and then when the thing came out and molested Shikamaru, I was like, "ohshitohshitohshitohshit!" and then...yeah. I sympathize for him, 'cos he was being molested in his dreams for two months, and that whole scene with the near-rape thingy...Yeah, it was pretty horrifying.

What-? You think you didn't make it scary enough? Psshaw, dood. You made it plenty scary!

So, anyway, yeah, you SHOULD continue to write this fic. Why? Because it has so much goddamn potential. Like BAM! What a queer plot, I thought, and then I read the story and was instantly hooked. Seriously. It's pretty well-written, and Shikamaru is in-character...And everyone else is paired up with everyone else...So, yeah. Sounds pretty promising.

Your descriptions are so vivid that I can picture it in my mind.

Were you watching some sort of horror movie erstwhile writing this? xD 'Cos I swear...

I'm sorta wondering who the freak that molested Shikamaru is...because, well, it can't be any of the other NARUTO characters, right? I mean, the main, usual kinda people. Like Neji, Naruto, Sasuke, blahblahblah...

TEMARI.

xD Sorry, I just had to add her, because she's so manly to me. Especially in Shippuden, her voice is so low like a man's, harhar.

Anyway, near the end, when Shikamaru's bones were cracking and all things creepy, did that mean he turned into some sort of werewolf? Some sort of...uh, not-so-very-romantic kinda person thingy, demon? xD I felt sorry for him that everyone left him out of the whole 'romance' factor...but yeah. Poor Shika.

So. Hm. Who the heck is that mysterious nightmarey being?! I WANT TO KNooowwww~www! -Wails-

Great job, by the way. o_O

OMG. I love it. Wow... I didn't think i would but... amazingly put together and well played out so far.

Homegee!! Shika's about to maul Naruto! And the whole thing about dog food made me laugh. Oh, and lets not forget the whole crotch-level thing. Ingenious really. That and the fact that Shika's a dog that no one can communicate with...that's just really really sad.

You're AWESOME!

I thought it was plenty horrifying enough. :) You had me all the way through, your descriptive writing was very effective. I'd love to see you continue this, at least through the 'three days'. Nicely done.