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by Lyndsay

person Davey Lockhart
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is an interesting story. What a little slut Sasuke is. But I like it a lot and can't wait until you update.
person charmpit
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully Naruto can save Sasuke from himself.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha... or should that be "he would have his hands full." >) hehehe
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i always enjoy itasasu. :D
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! you updated this fast? and yay! you had a lemon for my inner fangirl.. and it was a nosebleeding hot lemon to boot!!yes..I`m happy now. MMmmmmMMm I lurve itasasu. can`t wait for the next update. ;P
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whaaaa.. .no lemon? *pouts* hehe.. but i liked it anyway. it was cute, yes..and i`ll be a good little fangirl and wait for my lemons.;P
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw.. now I feel bad for Sasuke. He's so beaten down. :(


Lets just hope Naruto becomes his pillar of strenght and he can tell everybody else to shove off as the two of them get together. ^^
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I missed something. Did you post the wrong chapter? I mean I kinda already figured Naruto was gonna ask Sasuke for studying help... but there was no midway chapter posted between Sasuke asking him to meet up the next day at the tree and Naruto showing up at his house. Just thought you should know incase there was a mistake. :P
person charmpit
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please! However you write the eventual lemon make sure Naruto is hung like an army mule. I want Naruto to bring the heat!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:) Just found your story... I have to agree with Naruto with the whole Oro situation... ewww! *knocks Sasuke on his noggin* And here I thought he was smart... :) I am enjoying your story so far and I look forward to seeing where you will go with this... (Esp looking forward to seeing Sasuke's reaction when he figures out that Naruto really DOES want tutoring... :) )