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schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mm, lovely fic. I do much like what you've done with this; the possessiveness of her teammates, and Sakura's choice of asking their advice in regards to her sexuality.

However, I just worry about them being observed, and/or over heard by the rest of Team Seven during this romp. I'd die of embarrassment, personally.
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW.....that was soooo HOT!!!! Great job!
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha he couldn't make her say yes, i loved that! please make him sweat a little before she agrees on being courted, like he'll have to turn up every day for a week before she agrees or something, that would be so fun X... an uchiha that doesn't get everything he wants :P
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think he's both! Lovers that is. He can be nice and gentle to sakura when he wants to, but I pictured him being rough and dominating when he came from things like missions and stuff. Just press her against a random wall and join the mile high club, know what I'm saying?

Also, I give you a trophy. Cause I use hate this pairing..but this story is making me think otherwise. Kudos!
person Lunar84
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it!!!

Wow what a fic so far! I unlike some of the reviewers have always loved Ita/Saku fics. Only the well written and thought out ones. (Leafygirl, Lady Hanaka, J-Pop Princess) This one ranks as one of the best! Loving how Team 7 is so protective of her. Nice to see Sasuke written as a friend rather than a total bastard. Even tho I think he is O.o

What will her answer be!?!?!?

Hopefully NO for some good angst. ^_^

Just my opnion on Itachi. To me I think nothing is hotter than the calm, soft spoken, polite Itachi turning into a rough demanding lover in bed. I can see him being loving when the time is right in this fic, but I like the naughty Itachi smutty goodness. Just my vote.
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, can't wait for more and see where you take this!
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mean fic-writer!!! :( This is awesome!!! Itachi is so hot!! Hey, I haven't read the manga but what's up? I don't care...spoil it for me, please!!! I am following Shippuuden, I have my theories about it, but I just want to know.

About your fic...update already!! I neeeeeeeeed to know!!!

Great job! Okay, I couldn't guess who the guy was from the first chapter until the end. I thought it was Yamato...so wrong huh? Update soon!!!
person tamiri
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you murdered me that cliffhanger! Will she say yes or no! I was so happy you updated that I ran to my sister's room to tell her. We were like "yay!" Enough of that, yet again you fic is so greatly written, it's just awesome. Can't wait till the next chapter.
person roxnroll
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I think Itachi could be gentle but he also has that demanding side too. I think that he would like being in control and would show her all the ways it could be.
Rox
person Kaysan
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I like! Honestly, I was hoping it was Kakashi when I read the summary but Itachi is so...yummy in this story! I can't wait to read more. And were her teammates still in the apartment there at the end? That would be entertaining to see their reactions during and after the fact. *giggle* Hope to see an update soon! Hugs & Kisses!