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person Anon
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Itachi? I was guessing Yamato! Itachi works for me! I so don't believe he killed off his entire family. I think it was that Tobi from Akatuski (how the hell do you spell it?). He is an Uchiha, right? Anyway, update soon! I so want to know what happens!!!
person dabiella
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I can't believe my luck. I was looking for an ItaSaku fic when I read your summary, I was curious and I have to admit that the part when they where talking at the bar was hilarious. It never crossed my mind that the mysterious guy was Itachi, I was delighted at the end of the chapter. By the way people, this is an AU, Itachi was ANBU and I think this is a Non Massacre AU, so it was OK for Itachi to be there at the end. READ THE AUTHOR'S COMMENTS FIRST.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL FIC, PLEASE KEEP GOING, I WANT TO READ MORE
person tamiri
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Extremely interesting! I love how Kakashi, Sasuke, and Naruto are all overprotective of Sakura it was so cute. Can't wait to see what you write next.
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD!!! NOW THAT IS WHAT I CALL A TWIST!!!!!

Bring more to this please!!!!
person Garbolo
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story... love the twist at the end...wasn't expecting that. Keep up the good work.
person Lunar84
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm really enjoying this fic so far. It's got a touch of humor that's refreshing to see. And you're right I didn't see that ending coming. Nice work. I'm really looking forward to more updates!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have so many questions so instead of answering them just write the second chapater and post it ASAP.
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! Bravo! Now...where;s the rest? Itachi at the door!? OMG! This was hilarious. I love the conversation between them over Sakura's lost viriginity. And Sasuke is so well written!!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. this is such a interesting and smexy story. (Oh you can't imagine how much I was glad that you submitted here.. yesssss! We need more Sakura related lemons honestly!! )
I love your fic so much. but I still don't get it why the person Sakura slept with (or should I say took her cherry? *smirks*)was Itachi.. cos he's a member of Akatsuki, not an Anbu...

I was thinking that it was Yamato.. or hopefully Hayate even though it couldn't be him cos he was killed by Baki.. (but HayaSaku is such a hawt coupling and I can't stop loving even though my OTP is SasoSaku..... )

but I kinda disagree with what you said about a virgin cos I've known quite many bastards who slept with virgins just for fun not asking marriages or even stable relationships... *sighs*

Anyway, thanks for wriring this fic cos Sakura is my favouite character in Naruto and it's so fun to see many many guys fuss about her and her mysterious lover.. *smirks*

I'm looking forward to reading next chapter so keep up writing! *wide grin*
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. Yeah, I was thinking it was Shino for the most part, but never even suspected Itachi because he ran away from his clan. Sooooo, yeah. Lots of azz kickin' to ensue because of that one alone, I'm sure.

Pretty good beginning, and I can't wait for the wedding. You got a few snickers outta' me picturing Naruto drunk and chasing animals-- "Here Keety, Keeeety. Come to Naruto. BE MY FER-END!" I can probably picture this so well because I can really relate; everytime I see a kitty on the streets, I've gotta go chase 'im. They just so cute!