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Mm yeah. You saw it, but I can only imagine it. No fun.
Anywho. I liked this chapter. xD I thought it was kinda funny. What with the conversations between Neji and Shikamaru.
Looking forward to the next update. <3

hehehe, guess your pen-name is more common than I thought. There's someone who posts in narutoyaoi with that one. Anyway, I'll let you know what I come across.

Very good chapter. I really can't wait for the next. Their so sweet and don't even know it! Things are going to heat up I think. Thanks for the read. :)

I await the oncoming surprise and smut =^.^= updates soon!

Wah an o-miai.. Very good :D *snicker* Can't wait for their reaction :D As always a great update!

Heheh.
Oh my God!
Shikamaru and Neji's conversations were so funny! xD
But poor Neji (and Shika too!, still having nightmares..

Wow.
Is Hiashi planning a marriage between Shikamaru and Neji, now? ;D
Kukuku, can't wait 'till the information is shared to the boys. :D

"Shut up and watch where you're going."
"Yes, mother."

"Shut up and go to sleep."
"Yes, sir."
Hehehe, Neji's so comanding. xD
Shikamaru's just too funny!

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

Yay to believable dark chapters! My... I just love you so much for that. Sometimes, when making dark scenes, people tend to overdo it. But not you. It was really great. I wish I can elaborate feelings like you do in your writings. As for the latest chapter, I simply adore the way you write the interaction between Shikaku and Yoshino. Awesome, AWESOME job! On both chapters! ^_^ Now I'm gonna wait for that omiai (oh it's gonna be good! I just know it!)

Reply to you:
Yeah, The Way Things Are was the fic. I like that one a lot too. If I find any more good ones I'll be sure to let you know. I've seen you on LJ, I think so I could tell you there. (I started writing one at a friends request, but it turned all angsty on me... O.o So, it's a bit stalled right now and I am not happy with it. *sighs* Yours is soo much better!)

Very moving. I am completely impressed. (bummed a bit, but I'll get over it) But absolutely totally impressed. Good chapter. Very good. I like how you've built everything up, layer on layer. It's going very well and your timing is wonderful

Keep it up

Wow, I have only ever read 1 fic that ever made me cry before. You have managed to make me cry again.
And I Thank-You!!
This is so well written, and detailed.
I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens next.
I do have to say that I hope that you make them a sexually active couple I really do love this pairing!!!!!

Awah! Poor Neji! I can imagine that baby... not pretty.
But oo~h this chapter was good too. =o Nice and dark. Just the way I like it. x3
I look forward to the next chapter. <3

I just saw Yoshino a few times, but the way i read it it sounds just like her :D
Very sad update :( Poor Neji. And poor villagers ... Well thankies :D