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for Chrysanthemum

by AWickedMemory

person drivven
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far, looking forward to your next update. (I love your take on those two by the way.)
person pen_name
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I love your characterization. And don't worry, I don't think anybody knows how one graduates from chuunin to jounin. I fibbed it too when I was writing my story, so you're not alone in this ^_^ I also like the way you showcase Shikamaru's talent in art. You noticed something small in canon and polished it as a part of character building in your fanfic. We all remember that Shika's tone deaf, but few realize how good he is in drawing diagrams XDDDD That's quite a new take. Very refreshing! Kudos to you!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is nice...I can really get in to it. I think I am starting to like the Nara/Neji pair.
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I like this very much already, so I'll be following it to check for updates. ^^ Hinata-chan is always so cute (even when she's kicking ass), and I quite agree with you about Shikamaru. He's not stuffy, he's LAZY, and prefers things to be as relaxed and efficient as possible, not boring. X3
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well gosh, that was fast!

*laughter* Ah, Shika, I feel your pain. Six days out of seven I never drag myself out of bed and upright until around one! (Afternoon classes are a gift from Heaven, Amen.)
And Wana's mom is good at her job! Tracking down a ninja with only ordinary eyes... let's hear it for stubborn determination to marry the kids off. XD
person pen_name
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! This is so cool! I can't wait to see Shikamaru and Neji in their omiai. Must be awkward as hell XDDD Thank you for such a refreshing story.