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for Chrysanthemum

by AWickedMemory

schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK first I really need to say I got the best giggle I've had in a long time. Twitterpated!!!!!! Thank-you I needed that. Now, on to this wonderful chapter. I loved how you kept it light but how you got Neji's mind racing it's way to overload. The familiarity and ease around eachother is beautiful. I think you already know my vote on smut or not. I will say that you should write whatever you are comfortable writting and take them in whatever direction YOU want them to go in. You know I can't get enough of your writting so I can say with certainity that whatever you decide will be the best for the story!!!
Also, THANK-YOU for your help.
Brigette
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back!!!! *missed you* The chapter was worth the wait. So nice to see them so intimatly cozy with one another. I'm all for LEMON. Annieme's middle name is LEmoN. I'm sure yours will be fine. You are a natural when it comes to togetherness mixed with WAFF. I'll love it
person qwerty
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I'm glad you're writing more chapters for this story again! I love ShikaNeji!
Either the interlude or going straight to ch 12 is fine. Whatever works best for you and keeps your writing flowing
update!!
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG please continue! This is great!
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I think Shika and Neji are adorable together. Can't wait for more.
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've missed this story and had to go back to reread it from the beginning! Still love it. As far as a lemon - do what feels comfortable to you! I can't wait for the next chapter - I love these two!
person Lolliz
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really one of the greatest stories I've read! Found myself grinning at the screen while reading, hope to see more soon. =D
person Twiggies
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finallyyyy!
Heh, really good chapter!
Poor Neji and Shika, they surely had a lot of visitors that morning. xD
And.. almost everyone of them asked the same question OR suspected that there's something between Neji and Shikamaru.

Awh, really cute and funny moments!
Awesome chapter!
..Heh, Neji really IS a virgin.. But we knew that all ready. xD
It's damn cute. And to know that Neji wouldn't really even consider casual relationships.. xD Lovelyness.

I'm not sure about that lemon. I'm of course really happy if you write it, but also very happy if you don't..
Write at least kissing and snuggling! xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Great chapter!
person Ciar
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter! Finally! And they KISSED! I love they way Shikamaru is rubbing off on Neji, soon they'll be known as Shika and minime! ... ooh, Shikamaru rubbing on Neji.. My mind is dirty, very dirty.
update please ^^;;
person HannaFO
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah the boys are all grown up XD XD
Thank you for forever burning the image of a flustered Neji in my head :D