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I say go for the lemon. You never really know what you can do, until you try. ^^ Besides if it really dose bother you that much, than maybe you could try, and recruit someone to help you with the lemon seen...*light teasing*Goodness knows, you have the time between updates.*light teasing* I'm just teasing. But really I am sure if you asked, than someone would be more than willing, to help you with the lemon. It never hurts to ask. ^^

Great work on the chapter. And I hope you update soon! ^____^

Smut smut smut smut smut XD I know it's touch to get around to write some when you haven't before, but hey, I did it, people said I did okay, I think I did okay, and we both know you're a lot better at writing than I am XD

Smutt for sure, lovely chapter. Love the story. Hope you update as soon as you can. xx

Yay! New chapter.

Ino is really bitchy to me in this chapter. Also, I wanted to ask: Why does everyone in Konoha seem like homophobes? Chouji was nervous as to why Neji was rooming with Shikamaru, then the whole scene with Ino, and the rumors everyone else has spread about them that you implied. Can't people just mind their own business?
(end rant.)

Anyway, I'm all for the lemon, but only if you're comfortable in writing one. I understand that having severe writers' block while thinking up a good lemon/critiquying your past works in the process is troublesome.

Well it depends on the amount of WAFFiness being crammed in. To much and it'll make me want to gouge my eyes out because I'm just not that kind of person. I can only take certain levels of WAFF before that happens. One shots. For the most part I just can't stand reading them. It has no context! It doesn't going anywhwere and overall it's just unsatisfying most of the time because I'm just like... was that really it? There's nothing else that's hiding from me just waiting to be read? I can't stand reading them because I just need more. My mind will always go off trying to come up with more to add to it when it probably shouldn't. I stray away from PWPs. While I'm all for reading smut scenes I can't just read a straight smut scene that isn't based on anything other than sex because it leaves me wondering what the fuck just happened.

Eh. If you don't like reading them then just don't do it. xD A story doesn't have to have smut to make it good, and even some that do have such a short undetailed scene even the dust bunnies hanging around my ceiling ask what the hell that was. Either way I don't care if you add one or not because I'll still like the story anyways.

This chapter though was amusing, and because I don't feel like writing anything else, I look forward to the next update.
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Wooo hoo! I am so happy that you updated this fic. I have been looking every day or so and re-reading chapter 10. This is sucha great story! Thank you for putting the time and effort into sharing it with us. I vote for smut, because smut is always good. :)

The story started so well. I am looking forward to the update, a real one this time.

Waaah! You're making me so sad! It's been April 1st since you last updated, and that was an April Fool's Day joke! ::cries and turns lolcat:: I can has Chrysanthemum?

Wow, I just found this...Shows how much I check on new stories. -_- Anyhow, first off, thanks for dedicating this to me! I really appreciate it! That and the fact that you liked my story as well. So, again, thanks! :D

This story is fantastic! Really, it is! I loved the entire pond part. HILARIOUS. Really, I was giggling myself. heehee And the fact that there's a first kiss is always a nice bonus. :D Happy day for that! haha I hope to see more in this story soon. ^_^ It's amazing.

please update soon!