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Awh.
Finally Neji is Shika's sweet little kitten. xD
So cute. Now they can't help but to kiss all the time.
Yay for the first kiss! The pic was awesome.
And the picture Shika made must have looked really awesome too.
Great chapter!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

PS. Yes, too girly Neji can be a little too much, but you are writing Neji very nicely.
Even though Neji is a loveable kitten at heart! xD

*jumping up and down in glee* First kiss...first kiss... first kiss....YAY,YAY,YAY!!!! *bounces happily in her chair* That was an a~wesome chapter. It has me all giddy and giggling and it painted a HUGE, silly grin on my face XDDDD Gods, I love you! Next chapter please, ASAP ^_^ And yes, I do read yaoi fanfics in front of my mother...because she doesn't understand a word that is written ^_~

That was very sweet. Loved the kissing.
I loved everyone at the engagement party too. Especially Kiba and Shino.

I LOVED this chapter!! I loved the kisses! I love you! I love how you don't rush their relationship. To have the first kiss in the 10th chapter seemed perfect. Especially considering the length of your chapters. You made my day ^_^ Loved the pics btw

loving it, and finally some shikaneji action, i actually like how your taking it slow. Makes it more believable. keep it up :)

You really are very good at this. I can't wait for the next update. I loved the imagery btw. How you described the portraits and the meaning, well it was great. Thanks for the update.

AWWW!!! this entire chapter was so sweeet!! And YAY *bounces up and down* Their first kiss!! Kawaii!!!!
And yes i read yaoi infront of her. She doesn't really care what i do, besides i am slowly turing her into a yaoi fan like me :D:D She's become upsesed with all the yaoi amv's on youtube heh :D anyhow thanks alot for the long update!!

Fanart almost done but coloring is so not ftw right now. I saved notes this time!

"There was just something about waking up from a bloody nightmare just to realize that it was a memory..."

Good line, draws the impact home sharply. (That scene was also very serious and probably touches on things most fanfiction won't, like the serious side of missions, etc.. I'm entirely guessing, since Death Note doesn't have ninja, so I'm not likely to encounter that sort of thing in the fics I actually read of late...)

"Stop curling into the covers! What part of 'get up' don't you understand?!"
"The part where you hit me with a pillow!"

Hee! I loved that.

"Shikamaru wouldn't do that. He'd think it was troublesome to bother finding an affair outside of a marriage. Creates too much drama. Kid hates that kind of stuff."

That also amused me-- too troublesome to have an affair! Wonderful.

Shikamaru let out a slow breath. "You're annoyed at me."
"No, I'm not."
"Yeah, you are. You tensed up, and you're glaring at the fountain as if it should explode."

That? Also hilarious.

I like it! I'm actually looking forward to reading more. Especially since I know at least one scene that happens next chapter... *feels psychic* Hee, future-telling artwork.

Oh, I forgot to add. "When's the sex?Lololol!!1". *flees to avoid instant death* Remember, I'm cleaning rat cages, no killing!

Let me start off by saying that chapter was so damn fun read, much like the rest of the story. I couldn't stop laughing when Neji found out Shikamaru was bisexual, I could just imagine his shock expression. Whoo! I hardly ever review stories 'cause I figure if the author wasn't sure of their work they wouldn't put it up to be read but like I had to stop and review this one 'cause it's actually really....good? I don't think I can think of a more accurate word haha. Umm but yea, I actually just started watching Naruto about a month ago after a friend gave me a fanfic too...look at(?), because I most can't read Japanese and now I'm hopelessly fixated on the show, but much more so on Shikamaru and Kiba haha. Anyways you're really good at the writing and I hope the story continues soon, but no pressure ya know.