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So I was under the impression that I'd read this to read it, but I'm on chapter six now and haven't been doing the *other* things I intended to because of it, so I'm gonna reply now, then go get a cookie and clean the rat cages. Why am I typing this when you're sitting next to me? Saa. Hi! Anyway, comment. I'm enjoying this so far! The details on some things confuse me, though you talking about Naruto has helped with the confusion and I can't remember which details they were, but overall, enjoyable! Shikamaru's characterization is really adorable, with how he'll occasionally reply really seriously to Neji and how Neji sort of accidentally ended up living with him. Very cute. Also, the pillow fight with the shadow attack was hilarious, and I loved Shikamaru telling his mom, "It needs water?" just to piss her off. That line pwned. Decided I'd reply now so I wouldn't forget those details, since I forgot like, four other things I was gonna mention. ^_^;;;

Please update soon, I don't think I can wait for the next installment. Neji and Shikamaru are rapidly becoming one of my favorite pairings and you write them very well.

Haha the pond incedent was effing hilarious!! my sister was looking at me (giggiling by the compter) like i was some mad woman with two heads :D:D Thanks for a funny update!!!

That was GREAT! I love it. I can't want for the next mirreg meeting. That was cool! Did I say I loved it. I LOVE IT!!! Great chapter! Update as soon as you can! I need more you hear me, MORE! LOL Great Work! ^___^

neji... and shikamaru....
in a pond..
soaked wet
and laughing their heads off....

absolutely perfect. not to mention... the thought of the two of them wet in formal clothes is rather... appealing. makes ya wonder what *could* have happened if they were really attracted to each other (and not in the cold) ..... XD

Aaawh... *blushes* Thanks for the compliment. And what's so blasphemous about what yaoilovergirl said? *goes to check previous reviews* Oh... OH! OMG! *blushes again* Well, I think you're a BETTER writer than I am. Seriously! Now let's stop this and on to the review, people! XD I just love the interactions here. Shikamaru and Neji being playful is refreshing, and the trio of parents are just amazing. You know, it's a wonder how Shikamaru could remain a genius with the way his parents keeps smacking him upside the head XDDD

-giggles- Oh god, that was insanely funny! Two grown men acting like children ^^ priceless!

I'm loving how you are building up the relationship between Neji and Shikamaru. I mean, I'm all for the fic starting out with them being interested with eachother, but I like to see some past to it all. You are doing a fabulous job ^^ I don't think anyone could've done it better ^3^ Muah!

Can't wait for more!

More or less it's quite unexpected for Neji to slip and fall into a pond. Hilarious when I think about it. -Sniggers-
Mm this entire chapter was quite amusing. I'm looking forward to the next update.

Ha! M'lady was rather amusing. I don't normally read one-shots, but I simply couldn't resist.

I really love how you manage to keep Neji in character but still manage to get him to unwind. The mental image of the two of them in the pond will be ever present in my mind for a long, long time. Again I can't get enough of this story and love the way you write!!

awww.....*pouts* but the plot is good so I'll give you cookies for that ~~ XD