rate_review Reviews

Okay, okay, I won't compare you to pen_name again (and yes, she IS a goddess) ^_^ But I CAN tell you that you are a brilliant, awesome, amazing and damn talented author!!! I bow don't before you ^^ And don't worry, I didn't die, glued to my chair (not yet, anyway) but by now I might be dieing of laughter. That was so hilarious, the two of them sitting in a pond, slipping on algae, kois swimming around them. I was howling with laughter and I'm still snickering. My mom is throwing me a side-glance, totally weirded out by me ^_^ Thank you for this chaper and please keep going. And yes, this time I'll add it - ASAP!!!

Ah, oh my. xDD
I just love the blushing, ticklish, virgin Neji. xD
He gets along with Shikamaru quite well, even though they are so different.. (One's lazy, the other's too uptight)

Hehe. xD
Nudging and poking. Then sitting and laughing in a pond. xD ..In February. :O
I hope Yoshino doesn't smack Shikamaru too hard. :D

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

So so so very good! I LOVED the meeting ^_^ They are just so cute together. How could neji not see it?

Loved the pond incident.

sweet as usual ;)

I just found your story and ... DAMN what a story it was. I sucked it up in about two hours - eating inclusiv - and then re-read it again because it's so damn fucking brilliant I can't even find proper words to describe it. The best praise for me to give to you is that your story is up to par with pen_name's fanfics for me. And that is saying something because open is my goddess! So whatever you plan on doing, DO IT QUICKLY!!!! I'll be waiting in front of computer until you continue and if I starve to death or take root in my chair then it's entirely your fault! ^_^

It's a good story, and I can't really think of any constructive criticism I can give at this time. I'm too floaty from reading! The previous chapter- 7- was really sad and moving. I think I like your humor best. Thank you, and looking forward to more of your hardwork!

I love how you wrote this chapter. It was cool. I liked it...a lot. It was a lot of fun. I hope you will try it again. I know you said you wont, but I hope you will change your mind...yes I likeed it that much. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can see things getting very intreasting and very amusing, very soon. LOL Update as soon as you can! XD

~Persnole Note~
Sorry about my bad spelling. I spell things how they sound, and well just for future note, if you find I word I wrote and don't know it, just sound it out, and it should get the meaning across...or at lest I hope it dose. *sweat drop* The word tiype = tight....meaning the feeling you get in your throut when you feel like your about to cry, and trying like hell not to. I hope that helps. ^___^;

you rock

Very well done, I am really enjoying this story.

One thing though, the smoking is really working in this story, and I don't know about the anime, but in the manga Shikamaru stops smoking after he's properly avenged Asuma.