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by Hiiroshoken

schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i really liked that story! so good when naru got turned on by sas being jealous and telling sasuke no one had ever been inside him before :D I request you listen to MORE naughty music and KEEP WRITING! Next we get to see incredibly sexy naruto wanting sasuke to take him. I loves me a hot demanding uke pleeeeaaaase *smiles* yay for you!
person Allys
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you okay?? How are we killing you?
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo AAAAAAAAAWSOOOOOOOooo....mE!!!! I love you more than chocolate!! Oh I'm so HAPPY! XD
person charmpit
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. This was a good Sasuke. The blue hair, was that one Anko? Her name wasn't mentioned. And WTFH was Neji? His cousin Hinata was getting her groove on with Shino the human hive and Neji wasn't there running interference? Interesting.

This is easily the third Naruto fic I have read where that NIN song was used. I wonder if Mr. Reznor knows what he's started?
person despairs
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was SO intense -pant- I like how they are possessive and wildly attracted to each other. I like how Sasuke said Naruto was his equal and that he only wanted him. Obviously the sex was hot and i liked that too..and the ending...it was perfect. I was extremely happy to see a NICE Sakura and Ino...HELPING Naruto get his Uchiha, instead of doing everything possible to prevent it. I hope you get lots of positive reviews for this, because you really deserve it. If listening to dirty music has this effect on you, i think you should listen to it all the time =P
person caidanu
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic job!! Oh I do love a good smutty Naru/Sasu/Naru fic. I thought it was nice for Naruto to offer his ass to Sasuke, if that isn't love...

Oh and many thanks for promoting my anemia due to blood loss XD
person LadyWolf
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this!! I loved it when Sasuke almost kicked his ass for answering that one fateful question, "you've done this before, haven't you?" He should have lied, Lied like a rug!!!!!!!!