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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooo glad you started the story again.
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay thank you so much for posting this chap! It makes more since now and it really sweet! I love the way you write this story and all the developments. I can't wait to read more!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Thanks for posting this...I almost forgot this was here...but not I'm glad I do have this saved as a favorite of mine!
Retna scanners for LOCKERS!! Please tell me there isn't something like that in reality????
Post soon!
Retna scanners for LOCKERS!! Please tell me there isn't something like that in reality????
Post soon!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love when there is blackmail material!!! Oh, the possibilities. I am glad Naruto is starting to catch some breaks thanks for writing and sharing this.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um......ok so this jumps around a little so maybe you forgot to post chap 7? cause it jumps from 6 to 8 and its kinda confusing. But great story so far and keep up the good work!
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, so funny, NEED MORE!!!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O OMG!!! *jumps up and down* more more more... i bet that's gonna be one awkward converstion *rubs hands together* excellent. ^^
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I noticed a typo at the end of the story I thought you would like to know about. You state "It don on him," I believe it should be "It dawned on him." I really like this chapter. The phrases that you use really show your love of Japanese culture. I was really impressed with the level of imagery. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. It has definately caught my attention. Very glad you made his talent music rather than something more racy. That had me worried for a bit. And I loved the music you chose for them to be playing.
Keep up the good work! I'll be keeping an eye out for updates.
Keep up the good work! I'll be keeping an eye out for updates.
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.