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for Beautiful Tragedy

by Mayana

schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know when i was reading this. i could literally see the first episode of elfin lied flashing through my head.. lol

but this is interesting. i definitely want to see where this is going so im gonna head off and read the next chapter..

ps : i had to sign in to review, you sure you un ticked that option or do you really not want anonymous people to review?
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;_; Pwz don't give up on it... I'll be patient and wait.
person hisoka
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ga, i really hate it when people barge into your house and start doing what ever the hell they want it pisses me off. and i thought kiba and everyone would meet naruto oh well.hope you can update soon
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sakura is less annoying in this story. Somewhat likeable even! Tis an accomplishment. ^^

Keep up the good work!
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi

"“It’s… Naruto.” Sasuke muttered, and Sasuke beamed back."

I think, taht it should be "“It’s… Naruto.” Sasuke muttered, and Sakura beamed back."

and nice story, btw :)

please, update
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Overproective Sakura! Thanks for updating!
person caidanu
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo...don't listen to Kyuubi, he's a sadistic bastard Naruto *bangs head off computer desk*

*clears throat* Ok now that I got that out of my system. Great chapter, I must admit I'm a bit curious as to what Naruto has planned for Sasuke. Oh the possibilities that are throwing my head into turmoil. Can't wait to read more.

Oh and great compromise on the whole Mpreg vote. I bow to your cunning to appease the masses.

*humps and molests*

cai

schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eh hehehehehehehehehehe hahahahahahahahahah AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAHAAAHHEHAHAHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEHEheheheheheheehe......

I like to join in with Naruto when it comes to evil, sadistic, maniacal laughter. =^^=
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All right! woot! I love naughty Naruto! Sasuke is in for a surprise! Please keep updating! and yeah that whole first bit was like straight from elfen Lied! Awesome anime! awesome fic! ^^
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What does Naruto have planned for Sasuke? Hurry with the next chapter!!