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for Beautiful Tragedy

by Mayana

person charmpit
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mpreg? No. Enough of that.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awe i love elfen lied and this story is a very good reinterpretation of it!

oh, and nay to Mpreg! (i dunno why, i just can't see the appeal to it)
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nay, no mpreg. not a fan of it.
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say leave it.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Naruto, I should say. Nay for Sasuke. Preg!Sasuke ewwwwwww
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, since I haven't been able to review for the last two chapters, here goes;
this story so far is very amusing and interesting. I like how Naruto gets a good reaction from Sasuke after being called dobe. ^ ^ Please continue cuz the suspence is killing me.
person mls
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
person caidanu
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that my little black heart clenched a little when Naruto was surprised at how good a warm bath felt because he had never had one. It's such a simple pleasure that he had yet to experience. Great chapter.

cai
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Tired?"

"Yep. *yawn* Killing massive amounts of people by ripping them to shreds will do that to a person, teme."

"Tch, whatever dobe. You sleep on the couch."

=^^= hehehe. If he only knew.