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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I like where this is going. Can't wait for more.
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p.s. I like your friends name. 'Spork' Lol
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p.s. I like your friends name. 'Spork' Lol
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Didn't take anyone long to find Naruto, did it?
Is Naruto going to beat Sasuke or hump him into submission?
Where does Itachi fit into this story?
Is Naruto going to beat Sasuke or hump him into submission?
Where does Itachi fit into this story?
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Already the police are looking for Naruto. I wonder what Sasuke will do? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I seen the show Elfen Lied. I'm very interested to see how you change it. I wasn't a fan of the ending of the show, so I'm hoping things will work out happier in your story. Either way it can't be bad, not when Sasuke and Naruto get some Yaoi action going. yummy!
Can't wait for more.
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Can't wait for more.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far so good.
Naruto is naked and wet...so, is Sasuke going to take him home and get naked and wet too?
Naruto is naked and wet...so, is Sasuke going to take him home and get naked and wet too?
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read this and I like it. I have so many questions running through my mind but I'll save you the headache and just wait for the next update. It will be interesting to see is Naruto starts to develope feelings for Sasuke since he's being nice to him.
Oh and thanks for reviewing my new fic, it is much appreciated.
cai
Oh and thanks for reviewing my new fic, it is much appreciated.
cai
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww. i was kinda looking foward to naru doing the whole 'nu' thing lucy did when she wanted to say or show you something since she had the whole split personality thing going on. but hey this makes it less predictable, so, please continue. i like what you've got so far.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! Please continue!!
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOly crap! This is how Elfen Lied starts out?? I was always too turned off by its artstyle to really seek out any interest in the show. Now it seems I should be questioning that action and check it out. O_O
Anyway, awesome first chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^
Anyway, awesome first chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Naruto has amnesia, or is he just lying? He's a sneaky secretive little demon, so I'm gonna have to go with the later.
Its going to be exciting later on when Naruto discovers that Sasuke is Itachi's brother. Good thing he didn't give out his last name right away, eh? ^^
Its going to be exciting later on when Naruto discovers that Sasuke is Itachi's brother. Good thing he didn't give out his last name right away, eh? ^^