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Wow, this story is so riveting. I can't wait for the next chapter. The faces that Sannin and co. are going to be so hilarious. Please update soon!

I really like this story It's got somethings That I haven't in other Naruto story's the first chapter was really good a few parts made me LOL.
Thou it might be better if they call Naruto by his name in public and use a Transformation Technique like Tsunade uses to hide the way they look to not freak everyone out. Naruto all ready made the whole town think the fourth hokage had risen from his grave.
Not to mention what Neji and the rest of the Hyuga Clan think of it's heir now being half demon. Also it will be fun to see what they do when they have to go on missions and can't always be to with the way Sakura and hinata are so depended on Naruto.

I like this story and hope you keep on writing.

I say continue. Unlike a number of stories this is more then just sex, but has some interesting plot developments.

Totally awesome.

I love stories like this, where the characters are turned into some sort of furries. I once read an Inu Yaha Story where Kagome also became Hanyou.

(Maybe you should consider to use the japanese Terms for demon and half-demon. Youkai and Hanyou, but that is up to you.)

I'm totally amazed with this story and I'm also eager to read more. Especially Tsunade's, Jiraiya's and Kakashi's reaction about their new physical state. ANd of course the reaction of all their friends... Hell it will be so much fun, to see Kiba's reaction that Hinata, Sakura and Naruto are now more canine like than his family (Big evil grin). I'm impatiently waiting for the next update.
Keep up your good work.

Good but please just choose one word instead of putting both Master/Mate. It gets annoying after a while. Just use master.

Great story can't wait for the next chapter.

Well it was certainly interesting but you really didn't describe Kyuubi's human form you got what i think Sakura's breast size right but i think Hinata's would range from c to d cup i think she was at the ver least b cup before the the time skip given what was shown and what not other then that pretty good so keep it up.

Wonderful second chapter, I love Kyuubi's new look and personality. I hope Naruto can find a way to release her from the seal so she can join her fellow vixens in his bed. But I'd like to suggest the term Pack Sister instead of co-mate, it sounds more primal and fits with the kitsune theme. I can't wait to see Tsunade's reactions to the girls' new looks!

that was very good. i loved it. the whole thing about domination got me heart racing. my only qualm is the fuzzy thing kind of lame. it usually comes up when the kyubi is part of the story. other than that i loved it. the page was wider then the screen and i think it should have been in the threesome secton instead of the het section. but great