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for The Perfect Day

by Cepheus

schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This would be great to have a sequel to. Sasuke's return and Suigetsu having to fight against him to protect Naruto. *grins*

Awesome story!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I ever reviewed this or not but I think it was the first SuiNaru I read and I found myself really liking it.

As per your request in your profile...I've written a NaruSui.
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are a goddess (or god (but i'm pretty sure your a girl)) of fanfiction!!! please update colorless vanity!!! i'm in love with that story and am dieing for an update!! pretty please with a cherry covered uke-naruto on top?
person a k light
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really likeit! It was pretty angst in some parts but I loved the ending! It was like a cute funny ending with the fists and all. I would really like to knowwhat happens with thos NC17 things naruto thought suigetsu was thinking about!(am I really that pervertd?)
And I think this must be the fic that made me hate sasuke the more! Iwas realieved and disgusted with what sasuke said to naruto giving him an eye, here sasuke TOTALLY deserves the title of BASTARD
person animelover
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
welcome back C!!! good to see an update, and such an interesting fic you've dropped in our laps. the best part is the "ending" where Hebi revolts against Sasuke. TEAH BABY!!!! I'm new to the SuiNaru thing so not sure about that, but hey, it works here.

c ya l8r!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Just one thing - instead of 'taking Sasuke back,' it should read as "bringing Sasuke back.' That's an error I've seen in a few of your tales. I loved the story though. Nice hint of romance but still a splice of life type of thing.

*puppy eyes no jutsu* Now, more updates on your other stories please? I've been eagerly waiting!