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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course you should contuine! It's a work of pure art and I'd be sad if you ended it without ending it!
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was HOT. I'm glad you decided to add another chapter to it. Luv ya! ~hugs and kisses~
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like it! At the time I read it I didn't know there would be a second part, but I' m happy you did it! Thanks!As for the other parts, I hope you make them break that promise!They already love each other I don't really get what it is they are waiting for!(even though itmost be hard to do so)
And I'm glad you remember "kyuubi the bitch" I hope you update it as soon as you can!Please!
And I'm glad you remember "kyuubi the bitch" I hope you update it as soon as you can!Please!
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked part 2. This game they are playing is tearing them apart sortah. I you do make more 'parts' I will be reading them.
ja ne till next time
ja ne till next time
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is FIRE!!! It is one of the best fics out there and thats only with 2 chapters! Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon ._.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was beautiful.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, and hope you add to it. I love the whole idea behind it, and feel it's very in character for both Naruto and Sasuke. The inner struggle in both of them is executed so well without being over-dramatic. You really pulled me into the characters inner thoughts and emotions and made it believable. I really hope you add more, as I feel it needs resolution. Leaving it hanging does have a nice artistically angsty feel, but I'd really like to see Sasuke embrace his feelings. Again, just beautifully done.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love so much about this story... how the sex has more words of actions than dialog! Yeah, most fics seem to have non-stop talking while it's going on... if you can hold up a conversation while you're bumping uglies, it must not be that good! But in here, it's great, and there's even the squishy feeling during reading the "I love you" Naruto and Sasuke say. Hot and sweet, I love it. And I love how I have no clue what Naruto is thinking! Why is a angsting...
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
[please continue this series , i cant wait for more
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!! Absolutely beautiful and amazingly hot!! I can't wait to see what you come out with next on this...Glad to know Naruto does hear Sasuke's words of love.. but what does their future hold? will they get past the promise and realize they both need and desire only the other? I can't help but wonder at what your ending means and look forward to finding out.