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by Lechan

schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Does a dorky happy dance* It is always nice to come back to this site and read something great! *Points at face* Do you see this? It's a smile. A big ass smile. Hehe. Loved you for Kyuubi the Bitch, now I love you for Promise. Ahhum, now if you would so kindly post the next installments I would greatly appreciate it....lol. Thanks for a good read! Uncle Sam has been kicking my butt lately and this has definately lightended my mood.
person Ivy
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Its one of the hottest fics out there but the story line is also incredible ^_^ The passion and emotions both characters are experiencing are so intense and your descriptions capture that beautifully. Can't wait for the next part ;-) Update soon!
person Damp`
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Does this story have a happy ending? 'Cause this was really a tear jerker! So dark and so very, very hot.

-Damp
person charmpit
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, part two was as hot as part one! I love the part where Sasuke is squaring off against (a witless) Sakura! I would have loved for her to really get a close-up of the chidori! Maybe you could work that out in chapter three, LOL!

I didn't realize you were going to update this story, it's already on my recommended reading list and I'm happy to have stumbled upon your update! I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I definitely liked the second chapter a lot also!! Honestly, as a hardcore love for SasuNaru, I think you should continue!!! I would love to see if Naruto finally promises Sasuke and if it will throw off all of Sasuke's emotions!!! Maybe he will finally think about what he is doing and whether he should admit if he loves Naruto or not! Oh goodness I could see a lot of different scenarios and I'm certain that whichever you pick will be amazing!! Therefore, as voting goes, I hope that you continue with this story! It not only inspires you to write but readers to sit back and enjoy what you write. Thank you for the update and I hope to read more!!!
person Davey Lockhart
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot and dark. I loved it.
person Ella
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing.
Please continue.
person 3jk
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue w/ a sequel please.
person Jude
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good!
person dyessie
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gahd. iloveitandwillreaditagainandagain. and thats what i think. Ü