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by Lechan

schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god!!!! That was one of the hottest sex scenes I have ever read....and I've read alot O_O. Seriously you have no idea that was such a good story. I love the intensity of it and I love a possesive Sasuke that's the hottest thing ever! Whooo man now I'm exhasted after reading that I need a nap^^ Oh and Thank You soooooo much your awesome!
person charmpit
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, Sasuke likes it rough!

Have I mentioned this is recommended reading?
person Kimmy
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
christ but that was so fucking hot...i loved it.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... you made me hate sasuke in this. felt soooooo bad for naruto. i think its esp bc it was never from his point of view so that non con feel was DEF there, but i guess he wants sasuke to stay.. jeez that was so depressing i couldnt even enjoy the smut and it was so well written too. But u aimed to write a dark angsty story not a happy fluffy one lol so i say: JOB VERY WELL DONE, you made me angst for sure lol
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! great one shot i could see it becoming more!
person subtlethief
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is one of the best sex scenes i've read: explit, passionate, intimate, hot hot hot:))and i expecially love some details about this lemon...It's a pity that it is only oneshot (it have good start for a long story, stories like that must go on go on go on...)... It leaves me wait for Kyuubi the Bitch update. Good luck!
person ibibi
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is amazing! The level of angst and all of it seen from Sasuke's perspective. he really is an interesting character. His personality is right on point during that period in which he decided to join Orochimaru. Sasuke would do something like that. You could say he goes the person that has the biggest offering. And Naruto would do anything to get Sasuke, not for Sakura but for himself. Since he wants to matain the bonds that were created before anyone ever noticed him as just Naruto instead of the nine-tailed fox.

This story has great smut. My pervy self was glad, and from my viewpoint as the story progressed Sasuke chnaged his perspective from seeing Naruto weak as someone that is his equal. If not more since Sasuke showed more expression as he and NAruto were doing it. Sasuke even ordered NAruto to hold him and To say that he loves Sasuke. Naruto maybe dense but I think he knows that Sasuke has changed his desire to own him physically to that of true love.

Great fic and I liked the flashbacks, it shows how brutal Sasuke was and then how in the present they both are pleased. I look foward to reading your other stories and reviwing.



schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. Dark is good. Darker is better. ^^
person Ivy
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this! I hope you make it a multichapter fic =) The back and forth was a little confusing, but I thought it was very creative and the sex scenes were HOT!!!
person Lola
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I nearly melted on the floor ^_^