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by Lechan

schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was deep!
person mls
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it !!!!! i wish it was more than an oneshot!!!!!
person Mort
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice- You did an amazing job of changing, the perspective in time-
person charmpit
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was hot.
person TimeFlys
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes it was kind-of dark but it was exactly what I was in the mode for ^_^. The sex scenes were fantastic!! I just wish I knew if Naruto was really being forced or if he enjoyed being that intimate with Sasuke. Maybe a sequel from Naruto's point-of-view? I’d love a sequel!!!! Pretty Please write a sequel?! *Reviewer gives author big sad, puppy eyes.*
person hpn
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That made me cry. It's really sad and sweet at the same time.
person Charlie
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!
Please write a sequel.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude that was.....*nosebleed*...amazing! I love the way you write!