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thats really sucks, for them to finally get together then he just leaves...damn talk about exit stage left,with a bang.and sakura even if she doesnt know how close they are who would be so full of them selves to ask no tell someone else to get someone, for them, so prissy doesnt or cant get her hands dirty.well hope you can update soon and hope its longer next time too

Wow! I loved it! I can't wait for the second part! Loved the way you took things that happen in the manga and in you unique way made it to fit you story perfectly!

If there's a way to notified me when you've posted the second part, I would appreciate it^_^

Jan

naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com

aww...hopefully he does remember his promise.i really do hope you continue this even though i cant always review because my computers crap and the other ones a secret i do always read them when i first see them, so i hope you continue much support

this is a really nice storyand i can't wait to see the next chapter.

I am really enjoying this fic. The story is excelent so far. It follows the story line with more enteraction
between Sasuke and Naruto. I am glad that they finaly got together.

I really hope you continue this fic. I am interested in finding out what Naruto's reaction of Sasuke leaving
after they finally took their relationship to the next step.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

DARKON

I've enjoyed this story so far, I do think your a good writer. I didn't like the switch up that you did. You've put the pairing as SasuNaru for every chapter then in the lemon you switch it to NaruSasu. Honestly, I wouldn't have read the story if it had been listed as a NaruSasu because I think Sasuke as a bottom is unrealistic, especially the way he is early in the story (I stopped reading the manga not too long after Shippudden started so I'm not too familiar with what's happening now). So I wasn't thrilled with that switch, felt a bit misled. But I do think your a good writer and the story is well written, so you should definitely continue. I hope you don't take my negative comments badly, it's really more of a personal preference than an actual problem with the story.

its cute how they want to protect eachother in the opposite ways.protect from a distance protect from your side,protect with your heart protect with your hands.i just hope naruto will keep to what he says and sasuke will come for him when hes ready(witch seems to be very soon seeing as hes calling him his boyfriend).hope you can update soon

Awesome chapter. Poor sasuke so lost in his revenge. Poor Naruto, a love not returned. So very sad and yet it makes this story all the better. I'm still hoping for a happy ending though.
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*nods* Good chapie, I like how your writing this. One thing I'd like to know though, is Sasuke going to betray the village and nearly kill naruto like in the manga? Biger question is, why is he nearly going to kill him?

im kinda glad he isnt mad at naruto for for leaving.hope you can update soon