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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I just read all four chapters now. I love your version of the Naruto story line. Can't wait for more.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when did sasuke start calling him his boyfriend?he must not have noticed or just doesnt care to think about it. theyve gotten even closer,hope you can update soon
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the pacing. It's not moving too fast, which makes it very enjoyable. I hate romances that are on speed. It's like they're rushing through the important stuff simply to hit the lemons.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is what the show would be like if it were made for adults. Good job.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it has a very nice, clam feeling about it. i'd love to read more.
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this chapter definitely was not disappointing, and now the story is starting to really pick up(you're following the anime perfectly in the beginning, there are so many stories that deviate from the anime and manga, it's good to read one that sticks close to both). Looking forward to more!^_^
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I'm glad that you made this into a story of substance and quality, despite the face that you could have taken the short cut and simply made it a oneshot about the accidental kiss that happened in the first episode of the anime.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes I just want to grab Sasuke and shake him. Grrr... for a genius he sure is stupid.
And that is probably a huge compliment to you. You have portrayal Sasuke perfectly.
I can't wait for more.
And that is probably a huge compliment to you. You have portrayal Sasuke perfectly.
I can't wait for more.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will there be a part II?
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. This is quite intriguing. I do adore this pairing, but I must say that I'm rather glad Naruto responded the way he did. Yes, those two belong together, but Sasuke needs to be able to accept Naruto for who he is, not who he wants him to be--I don't blame him for trying to make Naruto stronger, which I'm sure he thought he was doing, but Naruto is never going to be quiet, repressed, and intensely focussed. He's loud and emotional--and already intensely focussed. So... yeah. I'm really curious to see where you're going to take this, and what the boys are going to have to go through to be together. (Please tell me they will be together in the end!)