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for Daddy

by angelofinnocence

schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice, this was that was the darkest fic that I've read yet
but then I'd say the father and mother had it coming. I
can say that I actually like it.
person Hellishmind
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man this was disturbing. But very well writen. I liked how it followed the song. Although, I don't think in the real story something like this might have happened. Too taboo for the audience, althought I've seen some anime that hinted at incest.
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a really sad fic! Really good too, though; well done. I absolutely loved this line, "I'm so sad I want to die and I'm so angry that I want someone else to instead."
person chelzi
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh/shiver* very powerful. i like those ideas behind itachi. not that it's true, but if it were then itachi wouldn't have to die. great story. i mean, it's a terribly depressing theme, but it's very well written and the emotions are so clear.~
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O intense.
i think i liked the part when he's 15, having a smoke on the roof thinking about what was going to happen.. and then when he starts plotting his parents' death. His stupid mom trying to pretend nothing is happening, as if they are just close like a father and son.. fucking idiot.
But a lot of people do that.
Good story, a little on the scary side though.
But I liked it, and i only read such stories.. or listen to you read them to me because it's you.
person move_them_hands
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I freaking love you! This was so wonderful, I love how you had it in first person...so far all the stories I've read in first person I've hated but damn was yours great! Itachi calling them mommy and daddy was perfect, just made it all the more enjoyable...made you think him more innocent and such.

You had the emotions perfectly, the thought processes and just over all angst factor was brillant! People can really get pulled into this oneshot.

So many things I want to say about this but I can't because not even words can express how much I freaking love this oneshot!

Fantastic job! Thanks so much for sharing this ^_^