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becca, this is yaoiismy. I can't remember my login information, and I don't have a way to reply directly to you.

I'd love it if you were to write a continuation of this fic! Let me know if you do, and I'd love a link to it so that I can read it. And if I can remember my login info, I can link to it in the fic. I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope you do write a followup!

i want so badly to write another chapter to this, one where sasuke tries to play things off and kakashi doesn't wana burst sasuke's bubble and tries to deny nicely and sasuke gets all desperate... im not sure, would it offend you? or did you even plan to continue this?

Well I must admit my dissapointment in the end of the story not even speaking about lower-half of this story. You can do better my love, I know that.10 000+ words and no anal?! Are in hell or something...

Love how you describe their perceptions and understandings. That phrase underneath the underneath is so overused, but damn is it ever descriptive. You capture all of the multiple layers of meaning and action happening simultaneously so very well.

Gah! I'm so behind in leaving these reviews, I suck!! But anyways, to be absolutely 100% brutally honest this is my favorite kakashi/sasuke story I have ever read, and trust me I've scoured the internet like an addict. It was beautifully detailed and really went in depth to what both of them were thinking, and I love that. Stories biased toward just one character's mind don't paint the entire picture for me, but this one did! Reading about how Sasuke is determined to hide his virginity and Kakashi having his doubts but going along with it anyway just gave the whole thing so much more meaning and not just sound like a pwp. I'm absoultely smitten with the fact that through it all Sasuke still remains a virgin because it makes Kakashi not sound like such a sleazebag =P. Plus, I'm a real sucker for endings like that as well so the whole thing was perfect to my eyes.

Um...I have a problem with taking up space, but I'm working on it, haha! ;P

I'm going to draw a fanart of this. e_e Can't help it. Cross-dressing Sasuke is oh-so-yummy.

That was a really good story. I like how you're able to portray such emotions and keep the characters in check. *.* You're a really great writer!

Awww... but Kakashi, you never had trouble with virgins before!

Hahaha, lovely.

Much coolness. can't wait til you have another fic out. btw next time you add to The Lucky Ones, can you send me an email with the web address to let me know? My email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

You...Are...God when it comes to writing Kakashi/Sasuke! *Swoons* Damn your stories are hot and they freakin rock!