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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your chapter 1 was great, really, the fact that i like it as much as I did even with Sakura shows how great but Do you realize how many fics have been ruin (for me, atleast) or I've lost interested in because of Sakura?
I don't know why, seriously, I just don't like the girl, I have never dislike someone so much- any character from any show- and I have no problem with any pairing (and I have seen a few really weird ones) but not her not even with Ino.
For the authors (now including you) I really like I usually keep reading and try to scim over the sakura parts but I'm guessing that's going to be hard if there's an actual threesome.
I'm Sorry, everything else is really good.
I don't know why, seriously, I just don't like the girl, I have never dislike someone so much- any character from any show- and I have no problem with any pairing (and I have seen a few really weird ones) but not her not even with Ino.
For the authors (now including you) I really like I usually keep reading and try to scim over the sakura parts but I'm guessing that's going to be hard if there's an actual threesome.
I'm Sorry, everything else is really good.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! hot!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like :D really well written. is this going to be a one shot?
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was SO good! Is this a oneshot or is there going to be a continuation(hopefully)?^_^
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa... that was hot.
hmm, maybe the next chapter will end in a threesome, eh? eh? hehehhehehehehe =^^=
hmm, maybe the next chapter will end in a threesome, eh? eh? hehehhehehehehe =^^=
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful, sweetie!
Really, just fantastic and sweet and sexy and so ridiculously hot! God those two could melt steel, they're so HOT!! *drool*
Even Sakura recognizes that XD
The broken rules were just such a perfect touch. It really conveyed the emotion and meaning you were trying to pack behind it. Naruto wants things to change between them and is showing initiative. And gods, Sasuke doesn't even realize he's in love with him yet. Or maybe he does and is just in denial about it. That boy sure can do denial like a champ.
And then there's Sakura. With one, but attracted to both. And gods, after watching them together, she's gonna be salivating for them both. I love the triangle you've set up. I'm very curious to see how you resolve it. It has the hint of a threesome flavoring, but you categorized it as male/male so I'm incredibly curious and excited for this.
Great job! Five stars for you! *****
Really, just fantastic and sweet and sexy and so ridiculously hot! God those two could melt steel, they're so HOT!! *drool*
Even Sakura recognizes that XD
The broken rules were just such a perfect touch. It really conveyed the emotion and meaning you were trying to pack behind it. Naruto wants things to change between them and is showing initiative. And gods, Sasuke doesn't even realize he's in love with him yet. Or maybe he does and is just in denial about it. That boy sure can do denial like a champ.
And then there's Sakura. With one, but attracted to both. And gods, after watching them together, she's gonna be salivating for them both. I love the triangle you've set up. I'm very curious to see how you resolve it. It has the hint of a threesome flavoring, but you categorized it as male/male so I'm incredibly curious and excited for this.
Great job! Five stars for you! *****
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and how Naruto took the lead and is trying to make it more meaniful.. but Sakura (No, I don't hate her, but she does bug me sometimes, lol) really pissed me off in this story.. xD HER boys?? Geez! Please don't make this a threesome.. (No, I have nothing against threesomes, lol! Like I said, I just love the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke in this story, and Sakura is like.. an obsessive pervert..)
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*droooools* Next please!!!! omg! that was toooooo hot.. mhm!