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for Out In The Cold

by PrplGrl

person SpaceCate
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaah, how could you leave chappie 5 like that??? You are leving me in suspense here!!!
aiaiaiaia, will Shikamaru actually, positivily say yes to Neji???
aaaah, need to know the answer!!! so update as fast as you can!!

ya ne!!^_^
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What is with all the cliffhangers! This is just evil! It's killing me! Update soon!
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Donates* I really like neji in this story. It's like he's just so cute ^_^
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it would be lovely to see shike and neji getting married, since that seems to be a trend i see with those guys being together...but i still love this piece^_^V
person cutsycat
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. That is the most evil cliffy ever. How could you just stop there? It's not very nice to the poor readers. Offers you cookies in exchange for another chapter.
person pen_name
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaai!!! I love this! So much action in so little space XDDD. When I saw that this story already have four chapters (been too busy lately T_T) I thought I won't be getting any cliffhanger. Boy was I wrong. Now what's shika's answer? Kudos to you and keep up the good work! ^_^
person ShikaBear
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UH Oh! Looks like the two are on waaaaaay different wavelengths. How is Shika going to respond? What is he going to do? What will Neji do? Please, please update soon.
person drivven
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was unexpected! Very hawt chappy! I loved it! But, darn it....now I want more. I really hope to see Shika's answer soon. Thanks for a fun read!
person charmpit
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You were not joking when you said this was PWP.

But holy shit, is it ever hot!
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ayaaaaa, evil, evil, evil...*tearing at her hair in frustration* What a cliffhanger! But damn, that was a hot chapter. I'm still dizzy because of the smutness @.@ And i sooooo can't wait for more, so please, please, pretty please go back and write some more, yes *making puppy-dog-eyes at prpl grl*