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for Out In The Cold

by PrplGrl

person Beladara
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want more!!!!! You are an evil person leaving that kind of cliffie!!! pure evil!!....but briliant!!! Now I'm going to get 0% on my exam because I won't be able to stop thinking about Shika-chan's answer...
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha, That was the perfect ending for chapter 4!! hahaha
I wonder what will Shikamaru do??? Cause he said (well thought actually), that he doesn't actually see
Neji as his lover, and now his husband? I think he would be speechless and then say nooo.
Maybe he needs to think it trough 'cause come on, those 2 were only having sex. but anywayzzz
Keep up the good work!!!
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!

Ya ne!!!
person charmpit
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was hot.

God, to be a fly on the wall inside that truck with them!
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wish i was stuck in that car just so i could watch^^;; and ya gotta love shika and neji getting married^_^V
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please you cant stop there. I like this story .I dont read the pairing very much .But you have me hooked. Untill next time.
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Most people would have made something like this into a one-shot, but I love the way you turned it into a full fic with a plot and everything. It's entertaining. I love seeing Shika in denial over his ever changing relationship with Neji. And, that question at the end! What a cliff hanger! We as readers can only hope Shika won't do something stupid like turning down the proposal.
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Back to back hot scenes!!!! This fangirl is deliriously pleased. You rock!!!!!! Loved loved loved the last sentence!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Please update asap, I want to know what shika says!
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OGM I LUV IT PLZ CONTINUE!!!
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this since the first chapter, but I've finally decided to review. It's an awesome story and I really liked that dramatic ending of the latest chapter, considering Shika just now thought of Neji as nothing but sex xD