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for A Troublesome Series of Events

by xireth

schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Kiba's too pushy. If it took 22 chapters before Naruto finally got to experience some action - action, mind you, that will have to be built up slowly over time - then Kiba can go fuck himself and leave them alone. Yeah, I'm sure he's persistent and will eventually weasel his way into their bedroom... but I need to see more of Naruto becoming more secure with himself and their situation first and releasing that inner aggressive Seme of his that we saw in that earlier chapter. Both Sasuke and Shika have already admitted to being turned on by a dominate personality... well the blond is nothing if not dominate! >:D (yay! uke Naruto stories make no sense to me. I can see sharing the position, but being exclusively submissive? never!)
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^_^ love this chap, can't wait til the next
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If I were the others I would let Sasuke go through with is threat!
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ya new chapters! can. not. wait to see where you take this next
person tellnoone_noonetells
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i have to b fast cause im not at home and my friends mom would freak if she saw me on here... thats sad im 20 and still having to steak around on this site! Ok well Im just completley in love with theis story!!!!! And now im dieing 2 c the next chapter. I can tell its gonna b anazing beyound all get out!!!!!!!!!!! After a dry week I really needed my yaoi fix!!! and u delivered!!!!!!!!! I love u so much right now! and u really shoud b getting more reviews 4 as goodas this is. Ok and now i run!
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OwO
I WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!
That wuz yummy! I wantz sum more! Pwease?
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now what do u wanna bet that wasnt shikamaru that naruto just cuddled up with lol??? and shika got his piggy-back-ride!!!!! I have no idea y that makes me so happy.... and of course every chapter that has a lemon in it is as goldenly colored as a lemon. and while i would like 2 give u a hard time about not updating for so long, im more worried about what u said in ut author note... r u really not getting that many reviews???? I figured that a story this unique would get lots of reviews. Jut keep in mind lots of people r lazy and dont review 4 stories even when they do like them. Heck I only review about a 4th of the stories i have in my favs. ((Im not that good at reviews I tend to ramble and and my mind comes up with these strange twists and bends that i want to share. then next thing i know theres a whole story.... kinda like now. So I have 2 work hard 2 stop myself when i review 4 u lol.)) What ever u do please DONT STOP UPDATING!!!!!!! thanks! ana i hope to see more updates in the future.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!!! Ok u r the very first writer EVER to get me to type that in a review! congrats!!! U just keep out doing ur self. Kiba is so asking 4 it. Shameless perv. What more can I say? I feel like I should bake u a real apple pie and mail it to you lol.
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol oh my god thats to rich!!!!!! I love it. If sasuke has half as much trouble with his bfs parents as I do then this next chapter is going to be a hoot and a haller. lol sorry, that was family roots coming out. I love reading ur lemons, and i cant wait to see if a good one of sas/sika/naru three way will be in the works soon. As always u did an splendid job!! and i cant wait to see the next part!
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry i havent reviewed on the other chaps but i loves them all the same xD This is great and awesome story you and Animeluney have come up with ^^ so thisll be for the last few chaps i guess but twill take long time to type for all of them lol Naruto is so cute when he is excited xD hes just like yay! im living with Shika! (Who wouldn't want to be living with Shika???) but then he has to go on mission T.T he needs to spend sometime with Sasuke and Shika xP that would be awesome ;) But anyway i love Tsunade being all "Your hormones must being starting to kick in because your witty remarks are irritating me" Go Shika and then of course when they go over to Shika's parents and Sasuke is like deprived of Shika sex. I wonder if Shikaku actually heard them *shifty eyes* i wouldnt put it passed him xD Anyway over all i loves it so update soonish!!!!!!!!!!!