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for A Troublesome Series of Events

by xireth

person kenshinjunkie03
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...i'll log in one day, but i'm trying to not get too many cookies^^;; anyway, that was a pretty hot quickie, but it's sad that we didn't get to see the dinner;_; lol
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol go kiba! man I want a copy of those pics! lol. I have some nice ideas of where this could go, and i cant wait to see if im anywhere near lukewarm. But any who, Im not sure y but i think im falling 4 the thought of an abused uke Shika lol. Again ur r dealing me crack. Well I wont make this long and i hope u sleep well!!!!
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved the sasuke breaking down scene^^ it really felt like he could do something like that....and i love naruto, i really do, but it's rare to see sasuke/shika fics, and i'm starting to root for sasuke, even though i know naruto will be in the picture^^;;
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While I thought that the fan service was...WOW, I still gotta say...poor Shika. How many times in just this one fic does that make? BUT, one part actually made me giggle a little bit. It made me think of the perfect cosplay...Shika with a 'Please Molest Me' sign. XD
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well this turn of events is appearing to be a bit troublesome, but nothing major... But still... y did it happen??????? It's strange and yet I still wish to read. Either ur that good, or Im that sad lol. I wonder if this will have any negative, or...positive... effects? Which ever way, ur still being amazing, and I was in the kitchen again to day so u get a slice of lemon marang pie!!!! Please update again soon.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Double itachis...HOT!!
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now, as much as i love itachi/shika, it breaks my heart when it starts out as sasuke/shika. but it was still good, very much so^_^V
person nm1716
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I just read all these chapters, and I have to say that I want more^^ At first I was a little mad that it wasn't just a shika/sasuke fic, but the way y'all put naruto in there was very good, and I can't wait for the threesome to come^_^V
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a crappy way to end a chapter, but still, AAAWWWWWWWW!!!! I loved that!!!! Such a happy little 3some! That was just enough jerkness to be real, but sweet enough to make the yaoi fangirl in me happy. Sigh.... The only thing better then this is a side slab of lemon pie. U guys r really out doping urselves with this story, and i hope u continue 2!!!! Please update again soon!