rate_review Reviews

Oh no! What a way to end it... poor Naruto! Although, I am glad to see him.

I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do

you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?

the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com

OMG, poor Hinata. lol I guess that is what she gets for just walking in though. ^_^ Nice SasuShika moment. XD Also, it's good to know Sasuke made the right choice...it might not be the easiest one, but... Anyway, this story is keeping me on the edge of my seat...you're stuck with me until it's over. lol

Heehee, I've been following this story from the beginning, but I've decided to leave a review now. xD

First of all, I LOVE this story so far! Its a great plot, and it pretty much involves all of my favorite characters!
I think you've just about nailed Shikamaru and Sasuke's personalities! I mean, yeah, they might have different reactions to certain things, but we don't really know that, lol.
I really hope its Sasuke's kid. xD But only because if they fall in love, it'll just be perfect for them. :D
Can't wait for the rest!
GREAT JOB! :D

Nice story so far. I love the fact that Shika is gonna be a mommy/daddy. You never see fics where he is the one to have a baby, it is usually Naruto. I also like the fact that the other parent hasn't been revealed yet. The fact that it could be one of three people, just makes it more suspenseful. And, yes, the precum thing is true...it is rare that it happens, but it can. That is nice to see a touch of reality in a fantasy type story. I'm definantly gonna keep reading this. XD

CAn't wait for the SasuShikaNaru smut =^.^=

*nose bleed*.............wow..........hinata is gonna have some GOOD dreams of those two!!!

anyways.......i like the story plot so far.

~_^

hopefully a good ending is in sight!

have fun!

AAWWWW WAFF... lol yeah that was what I ment. Sorry but when I get really into a good story and I really want to review I tend to missspell a lot. Look at it this way: The more spelling mistakes there r in a review the better a ur doing as a writer lol. But any who I do so love this story now. And how big of a tease is it to tell me Ill have to wait to see about Naruto?? I eeerrrrrr you.... But ur doing a great job, and u update fast too! Just the kind of combo I like to see in my writers. And yes ur one of my writers now. I deem it so! So go have urself a cookie and type us up a new chapter of amazement!

O.o *faints*

*gets back up* OMFG!!!!!!!!! plot twist!!! yay!!!


oh sorry i was very surprised to see that ending on that chapter!! o.O

keep smilin'!