rate_review Reviews

This chapter seemed good enough to me.
You know, I just thought of something. It seems we've switched roles.
You were the one writing the PWP stories while I was writing the angsty stuff.
Now, you're writing the angst (though it is milder than my angst, which is good) and I'm writing the PWP!
I wonder if perhaps our muses are comunicating or something... weird.
Anyway, keep up the excellent work, I look forward to seeing what Naruto is going to pull out of his ass on this!

-Prpl Grl

*This review was donated for Neko Izumi's "Keeping Authors Happy" non-profit organization*

P.S.: My PWP is Out In The Cold, a ShikaNeji. I'd be honored if you checked it out! (when you have time, of course)

wonderful and engaging story - well written

Yes, I'm still enjoying the story. Very much so ^_^ And I think this chapter isn't as bad as you made it out to be. I'm eager to see what Naruto's plan B is, so please keep going ^_^

"i hate you all." LOL!!!!!!! i cant wait to see naru's plan. keep up the grat work!

Naruto is just so funny.

Shika's "plan" for him and Asuma was very bitter sweet.

Thanks for another chapter and looking forward to Naruto's Plan B.

Wow. I'm not really into any other pairings beside NaruSasu, but this story's pretty damn good.

Oh dear God that was soooo sweet. The way you describe them is so in canon it's almost creepy. I don't mean canon as in exactly like the anime/manga but canon in the sense of thinking and acting the way they COULD be acting in the anime...am I making any sense here? o.O I don't think so ^_^' Anyway, I really like this one so far so please keep going. I don't need to add the ASAP, do I? ^_~

Guilty.
Anyway, I love it.
You told me you don't do angst, but you're doing a pretty good job of it so far.
Your writing is awesome, that's why I read whatever you dish out (as long as it's not SasuNaru-I'm sick of that pairing)
When Shikamaru teared up, I must say that sounded vaguely familiar... ;D
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the excellent work, sweetie!

-Prpl Grl


*Donated for Neko Izumi's "Keeping Authors Happy* non-profit organization*

Must review everything you write because you are a phenomenal writer. Loved the photo booth pictures. And it was a very nice touch that Naruto said almost the same words to Shika that Shika had said to Asuma about doing something else with his mouth.

Cute idea...I love Shika/Naru pairings. Just not enough of them out there!