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for Feelings of Love and Lust

by mokie

schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: First off, thank you so much for reviewing my story, "Broken Mirror". I really appreciate it and I am sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I feel like your story is much better than mine, especially since it follows along the same theme. I missed a lot of the details in mine. Like clients not taking care of Sasuke's erection afterward. Anyway, moving on to chapter 2.
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: How dare that guy try to rape Sasuke! Naruto's made a new friend, I see. Uh oh, Itachi's pissed. That can't be good. And I'm not even going to comment on Orochimaru...he's always gross and he's always taking advantage of Sasuke. I hope you finish this. I would really like to see how it all ends. Thanks again for reading and reviewing "Broken Mirror" way back when.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait..! Yah!good work!
person caidanu
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I would be willing to beta for you. If you're interested e-mail me and we can discuss details.

caidanu@yahoo.com
person Dragon7
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, poor Sasuke. Great chapter, tho. Some mechanical errors, but it's understandable.
person Dragon7
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
person mls
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more of this story!!!!!!