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schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really don't do Ita/Sas/Naru because of the whole ItaSasu aspect of it but something told me to read this, and ironically I like this better than the first 'Education' oneshot. I found this to be really good, and i hope you do another Education piece since Sasuke was the authority figure in the first one and Itachi the authority figure in this one, how about one where Naruto is the authority figure?
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Oh dear!! That was HOT!!!! *pants slightly while fanning self frantically* Will there be more?
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good! Itachi can be so deliciously evil! Great plot and even greater smut!
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it!

Seriously, great job sweetie! A NarutoxUchiha sandwich is just ridiculously hot and smexy! Mmm....

And I loved how this one ended! The original education made me sad, but this, this was just perfect. So sweet and tender.

Fave line: ...the two boys beneath him were almost like a boxed set, like they belonged together...

I love how with just that one sentence you conveyed the complexity and inevitability that is NaruSasu.
And then tender, caring Itachi was just about my undoing. I loved him in this! Very bastardly and true to form, and yet, still oddly attached. And the reciprocated attachement from the boys.

You should think about continuing this... (hint hint XD)

Beautiful!
person TimeFlys
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so hot! Loved it - I can only hope your consider making a sequel. (I’d love to hear sasuke’s view on this) Thanks for the yummy ness!