rate_review Reviews

hahhaha.fish stick's that was great.if i was naruto,i woulda threatend to boil kisame.hahahaahhaah

I like the way you ended it better. I think we should be able to use our own imagination sometimes. Great Story and I hope you plan on writing more.

i really liked this even though it lacked details your viewpoints came out loud and clear. i hope to see more of your writing in the future. and just to say that i believe that if you are having trouble or you feel something is not your strong point (like sex or battle scenes) put them up anyway because if something is wrong with it someone will always point it out and will help you improve on it. practice makes perfect they all say. looking forward to seeing your author's name again.

the thought of this being a death fic a first put me off but i decided to give it a looksee and i was not disappointed. i like how you showed the importance of their freindship throught their gifts to each other and the way that they took care of them. i thought it was cute that sasuke took his mightyena to the sound. even though it will proably break my heart i can't wait til the next chapter.

I like this chapter but I felt like it went a little too fast. I saw more in each segment than you wrote I guess. Like in the bridge segment when Sasuke got in front of Naruto You cloud have wore me out with that and had me in tears with the friendship proclimation. Just sayin'. Other than that I'm still enjoying your story.

That was a great first chapter. I can't wait for the next two.