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omg love it moree!!!!!!!!!!!

omg, I loovvee ittt, but no threesomes with sakura, it just wouldn't fit right.
but still AMAZZZINGGG CHAPPYYY!!!!!!!!!!

OH SASUKE!!! Bad! Bad! Bad! Lol, ignore me. But seriously, I am still totally in love with this story! It's so awesome!!! Aww...cute, little Sakura, she's so innocent. I really can't help but wonder how everything is gonna pan out for her in the end! Love ya Sakura! Best of luck! Lol and great job to the author! You've made Sho-Chan vewy vwey happy, lol! Much love, keep up the great work!

~Sho-Chan~

A most enjoyable tale you are spinning here I would like to see more of it. Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.

Here is a thought how bout you add the girl Sasuke is engaged too in to a threesome with him and Sakura. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kurenai, and Temati.

awsome. very good, cant wait to read more. naruto was introduced in the first chapter. you should use him or atleast include him in some thing. well write on my wayward author

Another great chapter! I don't know why I keep getting surprised by how kinky this story is, but its a pleasant surprise :D The forcefulness of Sasuke's initiative is hawt as always, and at the same time endearing to see his own confusion about how obsessed he is. The Sakura part was also surprisingly sexy, too; even if Sasuke doesn't fully realize it yet she's as dirty as he is. It will be fun to watch how the relationship and the sex develops as Sakura begins to become more comfortable with her urges and Sasuke becomes more emotionally attached.

The end part was a nice touch, too. I'd noticed how unusually sensitive Sakura had been in this story, so I was glad to see you address how someone so responsive could feel too much sensation. Sasuke seemed surprised to see how sensitive she was, and her over-sensitivity combined with his insatiability as part of what makes this story so erotic. While you don't try to make us sit through tons of set-up to get to the pr0n/plot, I like the glimpse we get of that bit of tenderness in the aftermath when Sasuke helped Sakura come down.

Keep up the good work! You're very talented~

CC--

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This was FANTASTIC! Really great piece of smut, and a thoroughly enjoyable read. It was so vividly described, and I loved seeing SasuSaku having fun and taking a break from all that angst. You write Sasuke/Sakura so well, I really hope you write more of them. The fanfic world needs more SasuSaku smut like this. :D Great job!

Now for my review of Chapter Two...

Sssmokin'!!! Another awesome chapter! The way SasuSaku is written is just so damn HOT! Sakura has just the right amount of innocence and wantonness, and DominantSasuke is just... Guh. *fans self* At the same time he was so sweet and concerned for her towards the end... *sigh* Very nice touch there, to show a bit of his feelings for her. Please write more, more, more! I have to agree with one of the reviewers though, please don't make this into a threesome. I think it would be wonderful if Sasuke and Sakura focus all their attention on each other. After all, they're already having a great time doing just that!

Can't wait to read more from you! I hope you have another hot chapter in the works! I'll be checking back every couple of days, hoping there might be an update. :D