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by Elli

person Bev
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really Really REALLY good!!! You sure know how to write a good smut fic ^_~ I hope you do decide to continue this further, I can't stop reading it!
person Lexy The Thief
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Really good. I really hope you continue this story. There's not much good SasuSaku anymore in AFF.net. Sob. I'd really hate if this story doesn't continue.

Regard,
Lexy The Thief
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing... and you write some of the best smut I've seen for them. I'd like to see a bit more attachment on Sasuke's side though rather than the one-sided love portrayed. Threesome sounds good (M/M/F hopefully) because I don't really like yuri XD.
person Elle
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOh that was wonderful please continue it!
person Soul Lysis
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Off the chain. I think this is what happens off camera, ne? LOL. I'd like to see another chapter from you when you get the chance. Maybe a NejiTen story? Tenten in a skirt she didn't want to wear, doggy stlye? Holla back!
person Nami
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was AMAZING!!! I cannot express my awe enough.. the sex was steaming, the writing was great (you used "quim"! I love it!) and just overall, it was fantastic. The pacing was perfect, the introduction and transitions made the story flow incredibly smoothly, and the hints of bondage and domination were SO HOT! Really, I don't have enough praise. ^0^ More please? :D
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!~

This is soo getting me off!~

Your way of a smut sceane is just what I was looking for.

Hard and fast is always to my liking!!~

I want an orgy with sakura and many hard loving men!!!~

Forever loyal,

~Ryokomaru~
person icyvfrost
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story made me hot. If you add another chapter could you have them have sex at school during school hours?

Also Would you do a steamy high school smut fest with Neji and Tenten?
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...

Just.... Wow.

I don't think I've ever read anything as hot as that. And I've read quite a few.

I love how you make Sasuke an aggressive lover, but then shows his tender side. *Is really liking Sasuke's tender sides*

I don't think I'd quite care for a menagetrois; maybe a continuation of what a whole day in bed with Sasuke worshipping Sakura's body would be like. Or, if you're deciding on making this a continuation, you could add more dialogue between the characters and have them fall in love. I noticed that there is not that much of a history between these two, and it seems like what they are doing is a one-night-stand type of deal. I would really like to see something more committed, but, hey, it's your call. You know I won't stop reading either way.

Keep up the orgastic work!
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again that was amazing, and if you keep updating as quickly as you did this time, well... um... I'd be very happy! I'm looking forward to a new chapter!