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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!Updateo!!!! I think you have got one HELL of a future in the adult-book writing business, lol! (This coming form someone who's only 19...tee hee! I'm a total pervo, lol) :3 But what can I say? Anyway, eough about me, more about this story! AMAZING! I love it and it's just so detailed and raw. Bravoisimo. Very, VERY good work! Keep it up!!!
Sho-Chan
Sho-Chan
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a masterpiece! Awesome, really! I enjoyed it very much, just like the first chapter; not only 'cause we see that Sakura is not as innocent as she may seem, but also 'cause Sasuke shows a caring side in ignoring his own pleasure to calm down her :D A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.
And yes, I know, reviews ARE addicting :D
And yes, I know, reviews ARE addicting :D
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you wrote another chapter, who knew Sakura could be so pervy? Please write more it helps me to relieve stress just by reading your stories, thanks for the update!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work!!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another hot chapter. Wow. ^_^ I'm really loving this. Usually it takes a lot to get me worked up.. but just wow.
Hmm... I think it'd be hot to read a threesome, so, that's my vote.
Hmm... I think it'd be hot to read a threesome, so, that's my vote.
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very hot! I liked the way you captured what it was that drew Sasuke and Sakura to each other, and dominant!Sasuke was a nice touch. There isn't nearly enough of this couple being just plain raunchy without the story either being sappy or angsty.
Sakura's wanton-ness was cute, but I really liked how completely insatiable Sasuke was! It seemed a good blend of his assertiveness and control issues, lol. But, most importantly, very much teh hotness. If you continued/made a sequel/made a different story of the same pairing, I would be very glad!
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Sakura's wanton-ness was cute, but I really liked how completely insatiable Sasuke was! It seemed a good blend of his assertiveness and control issues, lol. But, most importantly, very much teh hotness. If you continued/made a sequel/made a different story of the same pairing, I would be very glad!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO hey I really liked this and hope to god that there is going to be more and Sakura is in the middle of a group orgy...(hint hint) please add more!!!!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* that was amazing. Keep it up! lol
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this! I thought you did a fantastic job. I would really love it if you would continue this. And I have to disagree with you. You do not suck at writing het.
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS HOTTTT :D AND TOTALLY, UTTERLY SEXY, awwwwww, I simply loved it ^^ Kind of dark, but really, really sexy - I enjoyed it very much and really think you should keep going ;) Please, keep writing!
Hail for SasuSaku! :D
Hail for SasuSaku! :D