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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I needed to read some smut while it's raining outside where i'm at and i want to review to make you update faster cuz this is so awesome.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, even though i already read this, it's still hot. Usually when i read a lemon or smut scene and i read it twice, i easily get bored cuz i read it already, but yours is better a second time.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was just as hot.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was awesome too. Something just struck me that should have a long time ago. I think you should make Sakura pregnant, because of all that unprotected sex and the fact it would make the story juicer. Just sayin, you're the author so you decide.
Update soon
~Mello-MattLiveOn4ever
Update soon
~Mello-MattLiveOn4ever
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, Very Hot!! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Rox
Rox
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even after a short vacation, you still got the power of erotica!
It's adorably sad when you imagine Sakura crying in the bathroom. She has such a precious demeanor but Sasuke manages to fix that so fast you forget Sakura even cried.
Thanks for the update! It's still spicy!
It's adorably sad when you imagine Sakura crying in the bathroom. She has such a precious demeanor but Sasuke manages to fix that so fast you forget Sakura even cried.
Thanks for the update! It's still spicy!
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading the reviews and I think you should keep this a straight up het fic. I don't mind Naru/Saku/Sasu threesomes, but het stories about SasuSaku are rare. It would be cliche to turn this into an orgy or a threesome. Wasn't a big fan of the yuri.
Hmm if you want some ideas, how about playing with vibrators? Or a little bondage? Could even do some exploration with food products. Strawberries, ice, whipped cream, chocolate...
Hmm if you want some ideas, how about playing with vibrators? Or a little bondage? Could even do some exploration with food products. Strawberries, ice, whipped cream, chocolate...
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! That was so Hot! You. are. amazing!
I really like the way you portray them, Sasuke is so Dominant and agressive! And Sakura is so innocent it's like (innocent)Beauty and the (sex)Beast!
Keep up the awesome(very hot) work!
I really like the way you portray them, Sasuke is so Dominant and agressive! And Sakura is so innocent it's like (innocent)Beauty and the (sex)Beast!
Keep up the awesome(very hot) work!
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Love every last bit of it! XD
Very interesting story and I cant wait to see whats going to happen next.
I'd greatly appreciate an email for when the new chapter comes out if you wouldnt mind. I can be contacted here:
Arcane.Desires@yahoo.co.uk
Your a damn good writer. XD
Arcane.
Very interesting story and I cant wait to see whats going to happen next.
I'd greatly appreciate an email for when the new chapter comes out if you wouldnt mind. I can be contacted here:
Arcane.Desires@yahoo.co.uk
Your a damn good writer. XD
Arcane.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is getting good so far, and I didn't see anything wrong with it. Now I think what could happen is that you should have Sakura be pregant with Sasuke's baby, and have her parents find out about him probably later on in the chapters even. Of course that is just a suggestion, and I hope you update real soon.