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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter,it was a new twist for me, I also loved the hinted Neji and Tenten(more please).
Looking foward to the next chap. Thank you.
Looking foward to the next chap. Thank you.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO Nice but that Skura and TenTen moment could have been longer and more hornyer... ya like ruff stuff is more to my likeing!!~
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is I'm lovin Library Lovin. I can't wait to find out what Naruto is talking about from the previous chapter.
Rox
Rox
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not too crazy about F/F or M/M, but eh I can skip over it. I'm a M/F chick :P
HOLY COW. Neji's HORSECOCK?! Damn, next best pairing is Neji x Tenten... ahahah horsecock.. I admit, he would seem like he's BIG.
Hopefully more Sasusaku action next chapter, yeah? *big smile*
HOLY COW. Neji's HORSECOCK?! Damn, next best pairing is Neji x Tenten... ahahah horsecock.. I admit, he would seem like he's BIG.
Hopefully more Sasusaku action next chapter, yeah? *big smile*
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice...although i really prefer sasusaku much better
a great job nonetheless
a great job nonetheless
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great!!!
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... I'm not really one for F/F, but I have to say, you've made me kinda like it. Eek. My friend would love to hear me say that. X]
Either way...This chapter was pretty hot.
Either way...This chapter was pretty hot.
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far i have only read the first chapter of your story.
But let me say, It was sexy =3
Great story, very ...detailed. hahah
Ja ne
-Sakura himi
But let me say, It was sexy =3
Great story, very ...detailed. hahah
Ja ne
-Sakura himi
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I love it.
For not having Het. as your forte, this is really good. Its crazy hot, of course, but the 'who' and 'how' and 'why' are very nicely laid out, and although this is said to be PWP, it looks to be an interesting little AU story. You actually kept Sakura's proportions in check, as many writers tend to NOT do and added in her usual personality from the series with her being something of a nerd. Of course in this more 'real life' sort of setting pink hair could defiantly be considered obnoxious, so that point was nice too. The descriptions were perfect, not repeating certain words or actions continuously and so it was not vulgar but sexy.
Sasuke's lack of explanation to Sakura as to why he's suddenly ravishing her in an abandoned library section felt spot on with his character to me. Another great detail you had was that he and Sakura do not have limitless stamina, as their both spent from their small share (or maybe rather large share for Sakura, but us girls are lucky like that) of orgasms.
The Naruto bit at the end was also very funny :D!
For not having Het. as your forte, this is really good. Its crazy hot, of course, but the 'who' and 'how' and 'why' are very nicely laid out, and although this is said to be PWP, it looks to be an interesting little AU story. You actually kept Sakura's proportions in check, as many writers tend to NOT do and added in her usual personality from the series with her being something of a nerd. Of course in this more 'real life' sort of setting pink hair could defiantly be considered obnoxious, so that point was nice too. The descriptions were perfect, not repeating certain words or actions continuously and so it was not vulgar but sexy.
Sasuke's lack of explanation to Sakura as to why he's suddenly ravishing her in an abandoned library section felt spot on with his character to me. Another great detail you had was that he and Sakura do not have limitless stamina, as their both spent from their small share (or maybe rather large share for Sakura, but us girls are lucky like that) of orgasms.
The Naruto bit at the end was also very funny :D!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"A loud groan came from who she guessed was Sasuke, unless another man with an equally sexy voice had come into the room without her noticing"
I just really liked that sentence :P.
Another fantastic chapter that is once again very SEXY. Sakura's observation of herself in the mirror undoubtedly came from Sasuke's 'I wish you could see yourself', huh? It was a great start to the chapter and Sasuke's sudden arrival to catch her crouching down in her lingerie was a perfectly timed moment as well. Cliché done right!
The sex was as hot as ever, and the slightly unexpected tenderness from Sasuke was a nice touch, letting us know he cares for the girl's physical well-being, at the least. He's in it for the sex for now, but I can only hope he becomes more then just interested in her personality and really starts to love it. Sakura's take on the whole thing was great as well, and you perfectly described her inability to comprehend the intense sensations she was experiencing. Not being able to tell pain from pleasure is quite a befuddling thing, lemme say it.
Well actually, for me it was not being able to tell scalding hot from freezing cold, but shove your hand in boiling water when your pickling something and you'll see the similarities, I promise.
Pulling back to the original topic, the ending with Sasuke lulling Sakura to sleep and forcing himself to keep his hands off her at the same time was a sort of sweet one, but I can't help but ponder on when exactly her parents are coming home and whether or not they check in on their daughter's room frequently...
I just really liked that sentence :P.
Another fantastic chapter that is once again very SEXY. Sakura's observation of herself in the mirror undoubtedly came from Sasuke's 'I wish you could see yourself', huh? It was a great start to the chapter and Sasuke's sudden arrival to catch her crouching down in her lingerie was a perfectly timed moment as well. Cliché done right!
The sex was as hot as ever, and the slightly unexpected tenderness from Sasuke was a nice touch, letting us know he cares for the girl's physical well-being, at the least. He's in it for the sex for now, but I can only hope he becomes more then just interested in her personality and really starts to love it. Sakura's take on the whole thing was great as well, and you perfectly described her inability to comprehend the intense sensations she was experiencing. Not being able to tell pain from pleasure is quite a befuddling thing, lemme say it.
Well actually, for me it was not being able to tell scalding hot from freezing cold, but shove your hand in boiling water when your pickling something and you'll see the similarities, I promise.
Pulling back to the original topic, the ending with Sasuke lulling Sakura to sleep and forcing himself to keep his hands off her at the same time was a sort of sweet one, but I can't help but ponder on when exactly her parents are coming home and whether or not they check in on their daughter's room frequently...