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person Noc and NC
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!! This is one of the very, very few stories on this site that has kept my fill attention through the whole thing, I must say. Usually I just skim through it for the good parts, if ya know what I mean. Plot is a wonderful thing, and I'm always ever so pleased when I can turn to my friends and say something like, "So I read this really awesome story on AFF.net, and...". They all know when I say 'awesome story' I mean one with plot and good grammar and the whole shebang, because I don't talk about stories that don't have those things. I just love their faces whenever lil' ol' me gives proof to reading stories that are more likely then not of a dirty substance.

I love Sakura's display of her shy side and the meek questioning she gave to Sasuke. The engagement was a daring thing to throw in on short notice, but a spectacular author like ye self shall have no problem pulling it off. Sakura's happy thoughts at the end of Sasuke being her boyfriend was very bitter-sweet, since that really isn't the truth at all, now is it? Poor girl! But Sasuke seems to be unable to care less about the engagement so maybe...!

As quoted by Inner Sakura Haruno herself in episode three, love prevails!!
person wishful
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hawt. Absolutely hawt, with some rough sex that is hawt hawt hawt.

I'm going to have to recommend NO on the M/M. There's already soooo goddamn much M/M in the Naruto fandom, that it's hard for we het-shippers to get anything to get our rocks off on. So say no to the M/M, and give us some more crazy hawt Sakura!Sasuke!omg!fucking action.

Some Jealous!Sasuke might be nice too, since I'm sure there are some other guys into Sakura... and she might be kind to them, especially after she finds out about Sasuke's girlfriend. Or, an even bigger twist of IRONY, would be to make Sasuke's fiance a dyke (like Anko lol) who tries to steal Sakura (haha, so I'm meeting you halfway here - no M/M, but some F/F is ok).

And Jealous!Sasuke leads to Rough!Rough!Sex, yeah?
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its alrght but I would like it if Sakura was more vixen then kitten. Like she be more than a just a quivering mess and that Sasuke can be the one who just cant be in control.~
person Velida
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fucking hot. So bloody amazingly hot. Please keep writing more! I kinda like how Sasuke's already engaged and Sakura doesn't know--ANGST! Man, is he good in bed, or is he good in bed?! He's one hot piece of ass.
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definitely wouldn't mind a little bit of side yaoi, but I've noticed that most of the fans of SasuSaku are a little on the anti-gay side XD

I would adore it if you added Naruto into their little fold. And I think that the whole arranged marriage thing will add in some wonderful drama for laterr chapters.
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll be honest, I don't want M/M. I love the fanfic, though. It's great on it's own, it doesn't have to throw in a threesome or yaoi, for me to enjoy it. XD But whatever floats your boat!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow you are amazing at this
I cant wait for the next update
person anon
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Seriously, Sasusaku makes the best het smut. More to come maybe?
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!
It’s a great read and I can’t wait to read more, so tons of inspiration to you and update soon!!!

It will also be fun to see Sakura’s reaction to Sasuke’s underwear gift, I’m not shur but I can see Sasuke trying to replace all of her underwear with silk, thongs, and the slit underwear.
person NeeN
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMNN THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!