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for Treatments and Transformations

by Clayton

person thas
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent corruption of the barney song!
person thas
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a suggestion for a story. kakashi giving the birds and the bees talk to naruto and sasuke. the demonstrating on anko or one of the other female ninjaand telling naruto asn sasuke to pratice.
person Ero-Bontenmaru
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And again I say it: you're good. I'm definitely gonna keep reading your stories.

You should post them in more sites. Readers in this one don't show the hardworking writers proper appretiation.
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
comments were incrediby funny in the second part. very well written but at the end of the second one it should be three logs. it was just naruto,kakashi, and jayari, so three logs not four.
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was the best fanfic i've read yet, you did very well in capturing their personalities. ^_^ I'm going to read everything I can find of yours.