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by Clayton

schedule April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great story it was very well done but wish u did have the naruto/tsume/hana scean, or make a little longer the kiba/kurenai/akamaru but what can u do still great story and the only one not getting any action was poor shino.
person Ero-Bontenmaru
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. You mix good smut with good writing.

Why did Jiraiya complain about Sakura? Did I miss something?
person Cyraxr
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kiba's mom's name is Tsume.
person Cyraxr
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The sister's name is Hana but I don't remember the mom's name.
person Clayton
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was actually going to have Kiba's mom and Sister and Naruto be a section of the story... but for the life of me I couldn't remember their damn names!
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was hot, save for all the yuri...but all the same, I wish there was more yaoi, like Naruto screwing one of the senseis, that would have been hot.
person dest
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great, am depressed about the lack of sakura/naruto. thought with ino loving sex with naruto and sakura she would have convinced sakura to try out naruto. especially with how rough she liked it. no way naruto could have turned down ino and sakura. other then that i am very happy. great story. looking forward to more stories from you.
person Cyraxr
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it but I would of like to see have seen Naruto's threeway with Kiba's mom and sister. Signed a fan of Kurenai, Hinata, Anko, Tayuya, and Temari.